Earth - 1995
Mission - Protect John Connor from T-1000 sent from future.
Status - Incomplete
Reactivating systems - damage detected.
Current objective - Terminate T-1000 - Accepted.
Equestria - almost one thousand years since Nightmare Moon's Banishment.
Princess Celestia, the ruler of sun and Equestria just recived a latter from her student regarding an long forgotten prophecy concerning the "Mare in the Moon" and is pondering how to reply. She knows she cant reply that she knows and needs her to go to Ponyville, a town near Everfree forest where she planted the Elements of Harmony in old castle where she used to live with her sister.
After she answered her student to "Stop reading those old books" , she looked towards the moon night before the Summer Sun celebration and wondered for those few moments.
I hope Luna that you are still there, under that false mask of nightmare.
She didnt know how somone will make sure of it. Somone who is made to wear a mask.
Hey there, Wreck here! I dont own MLP:FIM - Property of Hasbro or Terminator: Jugment Day - Property of James Cameron.
Other than that please enjoy, give tips / opinions / suggestions / criticism and any other personal thoughts.
BE AWARE - certain tags are late to be updated and I'm notifying if any of chapters have "red" tags, and you are allowed to skip said scenes to moment I marked in author notes.
(Cover art is FINNALY HERE)
(Editor spot is taken)
Interesting I keep track of this.
Wouldn’t mind longer chapters is my only criticism at this time.
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Yup right now i needed those two chapters to submit the story next chapters should be betwen 4k or 5k depending if i write fast and good enough.
Okay a few notes
1. Why would he have a mission to return to Earth?
Returning to Earth would reintroduce the Skynet systems to the timeline. Logically if he does return he have to find a way to destroy himself again. It would be better to attempt to return.
2. Apple bloom’s text color... Agh my eyes they bleed! Okay joke aside it hard to see on a white background.
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Well as per Terminator / Inflitrator programing as soon as he has finished his order's he is to return to Home where he can perform maintnence and etc. And even if T - 800 has an -amount- of self awearnes he cant really "create new task" unless it helps with the main mission. [Side Missions that keep appearing] And well since he did succed in his assigment then what is he to do than to "Return to Base and await next Assigment".
No i dont mean back to when John had 9 years. I mean when he was leader of resistance [but as it turns out skynet didnt really appear after T: Jugment Day]
Plus i do plan to "force" his programing to change main objective soon so no worries :D .
[The motive is explained somewhat in T: Salvation where subccossiusnes / programming of Marcus that drow him back to "fixing table" / room where he talks with skynet after he quoting skynet "To infiltrate, find target, and lead it to us." Talked John Connor to just walk straight into skynet's Factory / Base]
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and for Apple Blooms colour in text... i used HTML tag for colour and its way brighter than i expected ... sorry I'll try to change it so something less eye burning
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Okay I’m working on my own computer/drone/android (really can we consider it an android if it’s not humanoid?) in Equestria story.
Right now it just notes and rough outline ideas. Not related to any terminator content. Just the emotionless computer A.I. learning about Equestria and “Friendship”.
I’m thinking of setting it after the return of the Crystal Empire. Near the Times they are a Changeling episode.
So seeing someone else tackle the emotionless android approach caught my interest.
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ah i see well Android for my term is an "Chassis that Contains an AI" so you can call it android even if its not humanoid in nature [unless it does end up humanoid Cough Cough]
As for emotion part go for it. Originnaly Tee didnt have emotions as we saw in T: Jugment Day but after time with John he did start imitating / loop coding that made him have [sort of] emotions thus i called it Emotion core - that currently couldnt be used much in Equestria since well Tee's sub-program's didnt start looping the emotion cuz... well no one currenly made himself a friend to him like John did.]
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Perhaps chasse that design to appear like an organic being.
My story won't be written for some time from now. I got two other projects I'm writing at this time, I don't have time for a third.
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i know the pain i have 4 other stories unpublished and this one is test if my writing and stuff is going to get me banned or not.
as for design of the body of your android you are free to think there are diffrent types as far as i have read the most common example's there are : the visible one [ you cant tell its maschine from mile's away ] half visible [ you see it has maschine parts but also it looks organic / deus-ex main character ] or hidden [ machine under skin / terminator]
other than that there are bunch of other things that i wont list for reasons that we both need to get to wrok on our stuff.
after all i have to introdouce Nightmare Moon to Tee.
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I say you are safe from being banned.
Look at the groups Looking for Editor, The Writers' Group, School for new Writers, and The Proofreader Group they might give you some help or tips for better writing.
I enjoy working with my Editor on my story Prince of Dreams.
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Heh i have fun reading the Prince of Dreams, even if it gets hectic at times.
right i need to go its late night and i have to get tommorow to work.
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Yeah, my current story a bit heavy. It's a fun challenge.
Take care it's getting late for me as well.
So, how many MLP Seasons is our favourite Terminator gonna involve in? And when will everypony learn the truth?I
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Well i answered this before but why not.
Its going to be slightly slower process. I plan to reveal his idntity to few characters at the wedding [NOT TELLING WHO] and the rest somewhere before or when Tirec attacks.
Also i will skip few episodes and have Tee appear in more major events etc. [Cuz noone wants to see copied MLP episodes , and I want to start with the original stuff soon... acctualy thats next chapter with the first original stuff wich is setting up home]
For how long this story is going to take... ehh? Its a bit of an experiment... so I dont know yet.
First I love the story. Very well done so far! Also.... never thought I’d see something from Hunt: Showdown here. Nice!
Have a great day!!!!!
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Hah Hunt is one of my favorite games. And thx for opinion.
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MERRY CHRISTMAS
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Cool. Are you gonna do every season, including the Storm King Attack, Friendship School, Young Six, ( probably Cozy Glow), and more?
And it's Lord Tirek.
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Right most of the events plus small info for you events regarding friendship school are going to be more on sidelines but they will be there.
Plus I will *shudder* make side story when *shudder* Twilight runs into certain mirror.
Also sorry about Lord Tirek name. I'm awake since 15 hours ago so I could have miss written his name.
Edited - right I'm going sleep or I might sleep on job.
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Welp, I hope you have a good sleep and Merry Christmas. So, you don't like the Equestria Girls Side Story?
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I like Equestria girls side story but... I have bad memories with the animation... Few times.
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Well we shall see in future.
Ignore this comment if you are on site of this story.
I amazed myself by just how fast I can make this story go so dark.
Anyway.
Authors notes in here for reason of having author notes taken above the story.
Luna doesn't know Tee specifically is the Metalic Pony. Just so you aren't confused.
And yes fake story being as realistic and since infiltration program is expert in fake identities, then gore eventually is going to happend in this story... From time to time.
Any other questions you are free to give.
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Is Tee at some point going to wear his Terminator 2 clothes but in pony style?
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Yes. [I can see Tee and Infiltration program smirking in my head XD]
Not only that, at -some point- I'm going to force him to use -certain clothes- [random rags and leftovers of clothes] for ...
well spoilers so i cant say what for.
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Maybe for the Gand Galloping Gala episode he can wear his T2 clothes with ‘Bad To The Bone’ playing in the background. Oh and don't forget the sunglasses a Terminator is never complete without sunglasses.
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A real fan never forgets the the sunglasses my friend.
And you acctualy guessed when he is going to have the jacket... Congratulations.
[To be specific few episodes before it he is going to "acquire" it.]
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Whoah no way I actually guessed right?
And you're right never forgets the the sunglasses. Until Terminator Dark Fate where Carl broke the cycle finally letting go of his Terminator side, say what you will about that movie being a box office bomb it did something not done before. Showing maturity in a Terminator.
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Terminator Dark Fate was... well you know. Not in the same line as other terminators. If you catch my meaning. It was the last one made [cough not counting Terminator Resistance wich i played tartarus out of it.] and ... well...
To be honest Genysis and Dark Fate were the least ones I liked from the Terminator Series.
heck I won't even start about Sarah Connor Chronicles [tho its better than those two above].
But then again what can I do about them being not as great as the others. Well nothing... so I just go with the flow and see the future.
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You know he could just draw it and ask Rarity to make it right? Then again it wouldn't exactly be Terminator without him “convincing” someone give it to him.
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Do I need to explain why Leather Jacket would be hard for somone like Tee to get from Ponies?
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Well at least it was great to see the original Sarah and T-800 one more time so you can't argue with that. Also even at old age Arnies still got it and I quote “he’s old, not obsolete”.
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Yes. Can't argue that with that.
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Why? Do you mean like it’s hard to make it?
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Oh making synthetic leather wouldn't be much of a problem if certain species didn't see it as barbaric act. remember we are still in "Harmony and Peace" Equestria. Also having synthetic leather would lead to assumption they used once leather as clothes... and here is the problem.
Pony Race has their coat/fur [whatever you want to call it]. They arent just hairles Apes that needed something to keep them warm. And since early ways of getting such leather was killing owner and then "stripping" him out of it... well as pony it would look the same way it was for humans to watch somone remove their skin.
UNLESS
A certain race outside Equestria [cough cough Griffon Colonies] intrdouced natural leather and equestria wanted to recreate it while also NOT killing anyone in process then maybe you could be right.
Remember that this story is kinda an experiment so i know if i get banned or not for doing stories like this one, so timeline has only the major events placed and few minor ones the rest i make up during writing.
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Oh ok I see. Thank god for natural leather.
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Also how was Terminator Resistance? Was it good?
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If you dont count certain awkward cutscenes and few animations that look like from half life era.
It was good. The almost survival like game with half-open world is decent.
The diffrent enemies you face also were fun, tho they should give some of humanoid models in the begginig to give the feeling of projectiles not being as effective as plasma weapons that you get once you meet the resistance.
Story is... if you ignore the awkward animation sometimes in cutscene then its decent for terminator series, with an interesting plot twist in the end. Wich also makes your previous choices in game important.
Voice actors are... slight pain but survivable.
While Terminator Mode is also fun but sad it has only one map to play on.
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Well at least we got a good decent Terminator game since Salvation. The down side of T Salvation was that it’s an arcade game so you couldn't exactly play it at home.
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T Salvation Game is... i didn't play it but i saw it.
And if somone said that Terminator in mortal combat is much better than entire T Salvation Game... then that would be an understatement.
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An understatement how?
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If i had to compare T Salvation G to any other game that i know of... then some pixel games are much better than this. [To be specific certain games from before Salvation game even came out]
[PTSD from Xcom Ufo Defense on ironman]
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Right i must go.
I need to check on *IRL Reason* and later i have to write next chapter and correct another story I'm currently making.
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Oh by the way at some point make sure to add those two famous quotes as running gags for every chapter or for when they're needed to be said: most likely the latter.
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I’ll take that sinister looking smirk as a yes!
UH OH... Discord, you better not!
CRAZY MOMENTS inbound!
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I just had to do this:
“Night of the Grand Galloping Gala”
Celestia: We’re so glad you and your friends could come Twilight!
Twilight: Well I wouldn't want to miss a big event especially with my friends.
Rarity: I’ve always dreamed of coming here, and now that dream has finally come true!
Luna: Speaking friends where’s Spike and Tee? Are they coming?
Pinkie: Oh Spike’s at the front entrance waiting for Tee to come!
Fluttershy: I just hope he does end up coming.
Luna: Why what’s wrong?
AJ: Tee kinda ended up declinin’ the invitation sayin’ he ain’t interested in the Gala.
(The music stops as every pony who didn't know Tee heard this.)
Celestia: But why would he not want to come to such a great event?
Rainbow: Who knows? Maybe he just likes being a loner? But it’s his loss, and besides I doubt he’s coming.
(Suddenly Spike came running in almost out of breath.)
Spike: Guys...good news...Tee just...got here!
(The group was surprised to hear this.)
AJ: Well wadda ya know Dash he did end up comin’ after all!
Rainbow: Huh, guess your right AJ!
Spike: Though I should give you guys a heads up, what he’s wearing might be a little surprising and unexpected.
All (confused): Why?
Spike: You’ll see.
(At that moment the doors burst open and out came a familiar tall stallion, and his attire was something no one expected. Even the Princesses and Mane 6 were surprised.)
Celestia: Oh my...
Luna: Well this certainly is unexpected.
Mane 6: Whoah!
-Insert Awesome Background Music-
(Tee was wearing black boots on his hind legs, black leather pants with a black belt, a black shirt, and the classic black leather jacket. One would say he looked like a bounty hunter, and an awesome one at that. He saw the group and walked up to them while every pony was staring at him. When he got to the group, the next thing he said would be one of many running gags that are about to come.)
Tee: I’m Back!
Twilight: You...you sure are.
Celestia: I must admit your taste in clothing attire is...interesting.
Rarity: You know darling I could've helped you wear something better than...
Tee: I like this.
Rarity: Are you sure because...
Tee: I. Like. This.
Rainbow: Just let it go Rarity, if he prefers the dark and brooding, bad boy, bounty hunter look, let him have it. Besides he looks so awesome!
Tee: Thanks but I prefer the term...Bad To The Bone.
Luna: I agree for some who doesn't show much emotion, he has some good taste in style.
Celestia: Of course you would think that sister.
Luna: What’s that supposed to mean exactly?
Celestia: Well you always did like the dark and brooding type.
AJ: Now now let’s not get into any sisterly fights. After all we don't want that again now do we?
Pinkie: You know for some reason it feels like he's missing something.
Spike: Im sure it’s nothing. Hey Tee wanna look around, you know just us two guys?
Tee: Yes.
(He walks up to Spike and a grabs a convenient pair of sunglasses from his shirt pocket with his left hoof. The group is confused about this at first, until Tee puts them on his eyes completing his classic look and making him look completely emotionless and truly...Bad To The Bone.)
Rainbow: whistles in amazement.
(Everyone was easily surprised and amazed as well.)
Tee: Hasta La Vista, Baby!
(He then went with Spike to look around, the group was left surprised at his last statement.)
AJ: Well there’s somethin’ ya don't hear everyday.
Rainbow: I kinda like it.
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I. Like. This.
Few small changes and acctualy it could find its place in chapter.
(Few changes as in half of the comment... But I still appriciate your small work)
I'll consider it.
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*Laughs in Chaos* Discord Laughed.