• Member Since 27th Oct, 2020
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Bravery


Hoi! I have no idea what I'm doing!

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A young unicorn named Charlie lives in a small town called Sage’s Hollow (Not to be confused with Sire’s Hollow) on the coast of Equestria. She wishes to learn magic in the form of witchcraft. The only problem is that she doesn’t know how. Will she succeed? Time can only tell!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 2 )

I really like the way you're writing and telling the story - even if the plot itself doesn't interest me as much, your way of conveying the world does captivate me.

The fight itself including it's aftermath of fighting the Shadow King felt pretty rushed but I suppose the wordlimit was reached when you wrote this piece for the Creative Writing Class.

Keep it up! :yay:

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Yeah... The page limit was 5 pages. But don't worry! The rest of the stories will not be rushed.

Hopefully...

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