So, yeah lots of new horse-words today. I really want to finish this story, but recently work announced staff are being recalled to office duty, which will mean little free time to write (I have an hour commute each way). I also find myself pretty unmotivated to write as it seems each update brings a handful of views and downvotes (sometimes to all my stories).
The fact that image is failing to load now is really telling, isn't it?
Honestly the bdsm stuff was just to challenge myself, since I have no interest in it.
I can promise after my Pinkie chapters the story is planned to go linear, but the fact I've thrown off someone who carefully tracks so many characters in their own writing tells me I bucked up royally with trying to get creative...
10587580 It makes sense to me... Of course, I've read the other three stories. You only have one major OC so far. And she's cute. Did she ever nab her special crush?
10588122 Thank you for your kind words. I do have to say going over my own outlines, any readers finding themselves disinterested or lost is entirely my fault.
Some of my favorite tropes in stories are broken/unreliable narration (Think something like Mr. Robot). I'm coming to understand writing like that is very hard to pull off and not for newbies like myself.
The good news is the meta first-person memory stone bits wrap up after Pinkie, so hopefully the pacing will feel more even after that and others might enjoy it more.
I hope you have a wonderful holiday season as well!
So, yeah lots of new horse-words today. I really want to finish this story, but recently work announced staff are being recalled to office duty, which will mean little free time to write (I have an hour commute each way). I also find myself pretty unmotivated to write as it seems each update brings a handful of views and downvotes (sometimes to all my stories).
We'll see what happens...
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Not familiar with that story, but don't worry, I know exactly what I'm doing!
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The fact that image is failing to load now is really telling, isn't it?
Honestly the bdsm stuff was just to challenge myself, since I have no interest in it.
I can promise after my Pinkie chapters the story is planned to go linear, but the fact I've thrown off someone who carefully tracks so many characters in their own writing tells me I bucked up royally with trying to get creative...
Oops.
10587580
It makes sense to me... Of course, I've read the other three stories.
You only have one major OC so far. And she's cute. Did she ever nab her special crush?
10588122
Thank you for your kind words. I do have to say going over my own outlines, any readers finding themselves disinterested or lost is entirely my fault.
Some of my favorite tropes in stories are broken/unreliable narration (Think something like Mr. Robot). I'm coming to understand writing like that is very hard to pull off and not for newbies like myself.
The good news is the meta first-person memory stone bits wrap up after Pinkie, so hopefully the pacing will feel more even after that and others might enjoy it more.
I hope you have a wonderful holiday season as well!
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Oh River will definitely be included in some fun later on so we'll see...