love it

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What specifically I thrive on comments and would love to improve if you have anything to mention

5/10 punctuations is need a lot in this fiction... A LOT...
There
“Ah’m with your friend there sweetheart,” Applejack added. “The best kind of honesty is bein who ya are and if you're both then be both.
It is post to be their
“Ah’m with your friend their sweetheart,” Applejack added. “The best kind of honesty is bein who ya are and if you're both then be both.

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No the correct spelling is there as in a location "it's over there!"

Their refers to ownership of something "that candy is theirs"

Applejack was referring to someone in a different location than her "your friend over there" I just removed the over from the sentence I appreciate your comments on punctuation but I have no real way to edit them in where they should be as I use the free version of grammarly which does not allow for advanced editing such as punctuation and wording besides obvious mistakes

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use word. I highly recommend it. hint.... outlook word!!!!!!!!! use that online... that's what I use as of today... When I use grammarly it clearly messed up all my grammar... So I kept searching for word a free online version of it... and I have... outlook word is the best...

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Thank you I'll Try it.

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I hope you'll enjoy it like I have. It send my fiction to the best capabilities.

Um....I got lost reading that.