Fluttershy, with the help of Twilight, plans to tell her friends that she's a changeling, but when Fluttershy and Twilight are teleported to a mysterious forest, it seems the two won't be able to find their way home.
Chrysalis' home is taken over, her people enslaved, and her son severely wounded. She has only one option to save her son, and her kingdom - joining forces with her old enemy, Twilight Sparkle.
After caring for and developing feelings for a lost, amnesia ridden stallion who was found stumbling out of the Everfree Forest, Fluttershy discovers that he is not the pony he said he was, or even a pony at all for that matter.
Zevan was a loyal changeling and did his queen's bidding, although he questioned why she had broken the peace. After being badly injured though, he had to reconsider his future, and a unicorn mare with a broken horn was a surprising part of it.
Mole Cricket, a changeling, faces the greatest challenge of his life so far: Convincing all four princesses that he deserves a chance at earning citizenship in Equestria.
I'm a sucker for meta theater, so the story-within-a-story thing is fun for me. I also like that you acknowledge the trope about changeling stories without it becoming a distracting 4th wall break.
10509086 Thanks! I have some fun ideas going forward. And I usually dislike the 4th wall break as well, so I'm trying to have it framed as a completely within Equestria story. Same as in the real world where people write about big events, I was thinking the same would apply in Equestria. :)
10595895 I don’t know, I show it as having 9 votes, so I’ll say yours is one of them. ^^ and thank you so much for voting and enjoying the first chapter. Have a wonderful Christmas!
Good start. I'm interested.
I'm a sucker for meta theater, so the story-within-a-story thing is fun for me. I also like that you acknowledge the trope about changeling stories without it becoming a distracting 4th wall break.
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Thanks! I have some fun ideas going forward. And I usually dislike the 4th wall break as well, so I'm trying to have it framed as a completely within Equestria story. Same as in the real world where people write about big events, I was thinking the same would apply in Equestria. :)
Hmm this is a very interesting story so far so he's basically telling story about his view after the royal wedding this should be very interesting
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I'm glad it's interesting to you! I'll be adding more chapters soon. :) It's nice to see people enjoying the premise.
Are the ratings broken for this story? Because I upvoted months ago and the vote count still hasn't updated.
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I don’t know, I show it as having 9 votes, so I’ll say yours is one of them. ^^ and thank you so much for voting and enjoying the first chapter. Have a wonderful Christmas!