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Why'd it get taken down?
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For the reason I stated right after lol. I had three clopshots in it but as an anthology, it didn’t get much attention and at the time of publishing I was just too lazy to figure out cover art and stuff. Now I’m doing cover art and the like to publish them as stand alone stories so they get more of the attention they deserve
This was great. There are not enough clop fics of these two out there.
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Thanks, I’m glad you enjoyed it! Like I said, this was a fun one to write. I may do more with them in the future, not sure yet
Cute
This site always needs more married clop! Fav and upvote was near automatic here!
Given the mood here would a word like "tap" be better than "strike"?
Also, it should be "mare's" not "mares".
Lastly, Rarity's father is named Magnum, and Magnus is the last name of one of the Pillars of harmony, so... maybe change his name to Maximillian, and then make a reference to "Max"?
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I think it's Hondo, to go by the toys, not Magnum, but fanon is flexible....
10901000
Fanon is, indeed, flexible. However clarity of communication should also be considered. Having two characters with the same name is confusing, but may be acceptable if there is a great enough need. Not sure if the counter-balancing need was great enough in this case? I don't feel like re-reading to be able to comment more precisely on if it was or not.
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So, when I originally wrote the story, I hadn’t yet seen the Pillar episodes and part of the joke is he has a huge dick, a ‘magnum sized’ dick if you will, which is a pretty central part to the story
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Also, as unofficial prereader (early reader at least?), I didn't even think to mention it. Besides, there's an irony to his being named rather like the daring, military trained pegasus Pillar when he's... Him.