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Jondor


Fabulous, darling.

Comments ( 6 )

This was an excellent read. Very sweet and sensual. Loved the flashbacks as well. Thanks for writing this!

This was excellent in every way I can think of. The back story you gave the characters that gives them more depth and fleshes out their personalities. How you tie that into their character motivation from the show and how that carries into your story. Working out an amazing group dynamic for them. The oh so subtle world building with the use of both nautical and musical terms. Even the way you integrate the intimate scenes that makes it work with the story so it's not something you just threw in for extra appeal. All of it was so well done. In fact, now that I'm rethinking it to write this, it definitely deserves a fav. Thanks so much for the great work.

Comment posted by SunDagioSonAria deleted Oct 22nd, 2020

hi i loved your story i discovered it while watching other fifction could you make Sunset x Adagio and also a lot of Sonaria?

Okay, so... someone downvoted every single comment. And there aren't that many to begin with. Some people really do have too much time, don't they?

This story is critically underrated/underappreciated, I feel. It's sooo good, it deserves more attention. I was always of the opinion that the best writers are those that are capable of picking two random characters or even OCs that I really do not care one lick about and then make me care about them. And you did just that. You made me care about Aria and Sonata. You got me interested in their story. Their struggles. Their perspective. So yeah, good job.

I had to grin a little when in the last quarter it turned out that quite a few of these folks are a bit promiscuous. Doesn't really seem like the standard, but then again, maybe I'm just hanging around in the wrong corners of the internet/FimFiction. Either way, a nice touch I appreciate as well.

Thank you for writing!

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