Not gonna a lie, that was unpleasant, weird and just a bit denigrating. Don't know if that was the intention but this definitely not one of my favorite chapters, I think I will just gonna a skip over and hope next time he actually gets to rut a lady, are met in a better term and Anon is view as a individual rather than a pet.
I think that was mostly the turn off, that after all the crap that has going on she keep viewing as a animal and not an equal like her friends…and she keeps looking him like that to the very end. That was unpleasant to read.
Anyway, does things happen and I still wish to see how he deals with boobs so hopefully next client will deal a bit with that aspect.
10552634 No lie, I rewrote this whole chapter like three times and I wasn't really happy with any of them. (Part of the reason why it took so long). To be honest, I kind of wanted to make it a rule at the beginning that Fluttershy couldn't be one of the choices, because they could keep on the slow burn romance through the whole thing, and he could separate his work as a stud from his actual love with her. And he could warm up to the idea of actually 'making love' to a pony that was a different species from him, rather than just feel like he was servicing them. But she became the overwhelming choice so early on, and I didn't want to end the story so soon. Plus there was the matter of Discord, whom I didn't want to just write out of the story to allow for Anon to have a relationship with Fluttershy, because I have a lot of fun writing him and wanted to include him in the future, even just tangentially. Because of all of these factors, it was exceptionally challenging for me to write myself out of this narrative corner to maintain the "episodic status quo". This doesn't have to be the end for Fluttershy's story, as I strongly hinted in the author comments. Maybe her view of him will change in the future... unless somepony else catches his eye first.
-You can choose whoever you like EXCEPT the mares in this list because they play a part later on.
It your story after all, you make the rules. And that is good, she only need time to repent and that could work for a character ark. But for now, I wouldn't blame him if he requires a break from all the mares, so here is an idea for the next partner. A bipedal creature, coming to Equestria as a visit or because Discord wanting to make peace with the human.
Either a sexy very tall minotaur, or a resident from Abyssinian either choose tourist wanting to meet the elements and see the castle of friendship, after obtaining the book of Twilight. What do you think? Give Anon a break from all this crazy mares and go back to something he is a bit more familiar with at least temporally?
That could even work as a wake up call to the other mares that if they don't treat him well, he could just pack his bags and move to other nations that treat him better.
This was frustrating, and also amazing. I love the interactions here, and if Fluttershy can understand animals then there really is very little difference between Anon and her vs her and a pet.
Discord's interaction was spot on in this setting too. I can't even imagine Anon being upset with him over it.
if Fluttershy can understand animals then there really is very little difference between Anon and her vs her and a pet.
That was my rationale as well. As I commented earlier, this was a challenging chapter to write. But that is the point of this story, to challenge myself, which is why I didn't make any character restrictions for readers to choose. The path of the story may not go the way I personally would have intended, but I try my best to do the characters justice along the way. And I'm glad I was able to accomplish that here.
10552653 I agree wholeheartedly with the Milky Way option. Maybe have her become genuinely interested in Anon or something like that. We don't have enough of the pretty milk mare. Though, I do wonder how he will react to her milk tanks.
Rainbow Dash. As we have learned she likes coming to the Spa for some relaxation, and after a hard day of flying around she could be interested in the new massage that Anon is offering.
10552684 Well, this assumes that the animals are as smart as a human or pony. Admittedly, some of them seem to be and I don't think Fluttershy would recognize much of a difference either way.
The ending to this chapter was so awkward for poor Anon. On the other hand, Pinkie Pie clearly needs to throw him a moving in party!
That last part where Fluttershy realized she done trucked up. 😂 All this time they started off on a misunderstanding, poor anon. Whelp, time to drown might-have-beens with work! Oh wait, he can't do that either.... This chapter was almost tragically dreadful, literally. Not the most exciting, but just about everyone in it is now disappointed. 😇
Unexpected but reasonable. I hope they stay friends, it wouldn't have been awkward if they had informed him beforehand and he had agreed to it - and who knows, maybe they'll do it again once he's more comfortable with stud'ing and has had some time to heal the wound to his heart.
Oof, feels bad man, good to know Discord is so open-minded though. All in all I think the chapter will be good for the development of the story, even if it hurt our man Anon.
Ugh. Was going so well until Discord popped in. Then ya lost me. But I'm just a jealous bastard when it comes to Shy. And Pinkie...
Edit: I apologize if I come off as cross or anything, like I said I'm a bit of a jealous bastard when it comes to Shy, so I'm really not a fan of just about any ship involving her, especially Discord. Who you pair her with is your choice, and all I can do is move on.
I'll go against the grain: this was my favourite chapter yet, and I look forward to seeing more.
The chapters were quickly escalating, and sex seemed to be the fast-approaching endgame. You can have as many variations as you want, but it will just get repetitive after that... Unless you shift the focus of the story to something else, as you cleverly did.
Now it's about finding someone that would consider him not a pet, not a commodity, but an actual partner. And yes, having Fluttershy and Discord treat him like a common animal was a 1-2 gut punch... But it worked wonderfully in establishing the kind of challenge he is going to face going forward. Being accepted as a person (or stallion) is much more difficult than getting perceived as a useful commodity (as his clients might do), and it is something that he will have to actively overcome.
I think the story now is full of potential, and I hope you will really leverage the challenge he faces going forward!
Also, as much as I usually like Fluttershy (And her way of thinking is, if not excusable, at least understandable as she can talk with animals), I kind of hope she will not actually get with Anon in the end... Unless she really redeems herself. Her words and actions really show that she didn't understand why Anon was Upset.
Still, I'm glad they didn't end the scene on too bad a note.
You threatened Anon? Why? I have my reasons Meanwhile in the Boutique You don't like Anon? He's too different and he lacks claws And? Well he also hasn't scale one on his entire spider monkey gorilla faux body
10553354 True. That should have made him extremely angry. He wanted to contribute to society and pull his own weight. He didn't want to mooch off of her in comfort and forgot all his potential for an easy home and sex like the other "Pets" did. And even with her sole ability to understand animals. That does not excuse her treating him that way. Everyone can understand anon and he wants to be a part of society. The pets had who knows how long to form even a pseudo-society with their "Sentience" yet they didn't. Why? Because they aren't sentient like everyone else. They're still animals. And they're all too happy to stagnate and live as animals accomplishing nothing and never advancing.
Of course. being the only human and looking VERY different makes it difficult for anon to be seen as anything other than a convenience. Like the marshmallow said. 10553243 Yeah, It was a very good way to introduce and make VERY clear the challenges ahead though. Definitely effective. And I actually see this as a nicer way of doing it. Instead of making some rando OC who is terrible and makes everyone mad. This was surprisingly a very delicate way to do it when you look at it after the 1-2 gut punch is over.
Bloody hell! Your full of surprises! This chapter had enough twists and turns to keep Discord mildly amused Well done Fluttershy the exotic dick craving fiend
Who will earn Anons heart? Perhaps Twilight? Anon is quite the speciment Maybe the Lunar virgin needs to be serviced? Hmmm Moonpie~♡
That honestly threw me for a loop, I did not see a romantic connection with Fluttershy at all. Did Anon just get his hopes up because he hadn't gotten properly laid in a while?
10552647 It was interesting how you made this scene really feel like a shock of cold water. Like this entire bit enforced the fact that Flutters, for what ever reason, saw Anon as a pet; I was originally gonna put animal, but every creature in Equestria is an Animal. You wrote this in a way that it make it feel like no matter what he was not gonna satisfy her or any mare just with sex alone. Sex in a relationship is suppose to be mutual, and seeing as he can't do that does make me think that might be a problem for him later. Added to that the was she is 'disgusted' by his confession... I hope later on we can find out why she considers Anon to be a pet, and not other beings in Equestria... Of is that just something about Flutters that she does not see a real distinction between All beings
10553862 Honestly, this comment is why the modern world is going to die. Women can't have a perfectly healthy baby past 30 and act like frat boys who can fuck around forever. They have a time limit. Men however don't lose the ability to produce sperm. Also, it's why women believe the lie that if they spend time making a career that the perfect man will show up. They chase around the top twenty percent hoping to make a husband, but that won't work because they don't have to settle leaving the woman lonely forever.
Edit: At least she had nice one night stands though.
10552684 I've figured out why this chapter soured me so thoroughly, and this touches on it. Unfortunately, I think you just undermined the serious portion of the story.
First off, a disclaimer: I may have misread the tone of the story and set myself up for disappointment. If this is just meant to be a silly kick-the-protagonist, porn-logic cringe-comedy clopfic, my bad, I'm in the wrong here. However, if the worldbuilding and psychology were meant to be serious parts of the story, you just gutshot Anon.
Anon's been trying to find his place here. He's been struggling with his identity and purpose. He thought he just found it, but he's had ample confirmation that he's never getting anywhere (even if that isn't true).
Anon: Guess I'll find a job.
Ponies: Eww, talking ape. Go away.
Lyra: I have a hands fetish. Do me.
Anon: Eww... but I need the money. I feel dirty. Fluttershy, what's the sexual dynamic here?
Fluttershy: Being a stud is actually the best thing a stallion can be!
Anon: Awesome! Humans are better at sex than stallions. I'm the Element of Maregasm! Wait, ouch, my arm.
Redheart: Go bother a vet, you're not a pony. You're good at sex, and Equestrians are fine with sex with non-Equestrians, but this is still just elaborate bestiality.
Anon: I don't know how to feel about this. I need actual affection.
Fluttershy: Yes, you need cuddles and sex!
Anon: I love you.
Fluttershy, the pony who knows Anon best: Look, you're an amazing trained animal, but you're not the same as a pony.
Discord: Yeah! He's not a pony, so I'm not even jealous! No possibility of emotional attachment there.
Anon: Fuck this, I'm out.
Fluttershy, Element of Kindness: Oh dear, the trained animal is having a sulk. Look, come back later and we'll fuck again. It's just like giving a dog a biscuit after you accidentally step on their paw. They don't have real feelings like ponies, you just give them space and a treat and they love you again.
Anon's just had ample evidence that he's never going to be more than a living sex-doll for most Equestrian mares. He can't be a real stud, he's not a real person. Even if this is not universally true, he's going to be a mess for a while, and it paints this version of Equestria as a pretty shitty place for non-ponies.
That was a bit of a twist, but to be fair, Shakespearicles was leading up to this happening. Still sucks though. The only slightly up side is that it happened with Fluttershy.
10554078 Everything is about balance. Both examples (the male and the female) given are both examples of extremes.
When you remove grays and only have extremes, your right, the world burns.
The Monk
Don't shoot the messenger. You cant fix whats broken if no one points it out.
Monk “There are many ways to create a monster, and the one the girl knows best is rather basic: you tell someone they're a monster over and over again, then wait to see how long it takes before they agree with you.” -Estee
10554231 I don't blame you it's just that Tinder and other apps like it have destroyed dating as it was. You no longer have to form a bond or take time. The best looking men have a literal hold over any woman they see. Those women think those men want to be only theirs, but the truth is much worse than they know.
Or they're just s*&%$ looking to get it on with whatever will. To that point I'd say have fun, but don't look for meaningful connections later because you threw that away early on.
10554114 Its the holidays, I have to do alot of running around, so excuse this quick response. I have a lot to say about this chapter so I will come back this evening and give a longer one.
But for now, I find it humorous that what unsettles you is what pisses me off about 90% of the HIE stories on this board. What you mention is EXACTLY how humans act when it comes to sex and relationships with ponies in most of the stories. (EWWW, its a pony, thats bestiality. I know you and love you, but your an animal.) read your comment and reread it as the humans thinking and you really do have the mental outlook the Authors give their main character humans.
It really is over done and ridiculous in my opinion.
As for serious, any story about the green Anon cant be taken serious. In my opinion this is a tongue and cheek story, the problem you have is the one I did as well. This one starts out serious and promising with almost no cringe at all at first. It became a spoof later as the story progressed. It took me some time to switch mental gears as well.
Monk “and brought her muzzle to his ear. “If you so much as hurt one little hair on her head, I’ll feed you to my cock,” she hissed.” -Some Leech
105542461055425210554114 Or maybe I really was just trying to push the reset button on Anon's 'romantic' progress as subtly as possible before things escalated too quickly in the story between him and any one character and ended the story arc prematurely, and any suppositions about 'this version of Equestria' or social meta-commentary are entirely your own, not from any authorial intent and maybe we all just need to have a nice tall glass of chill until the next chapter.
Not gonna a lie, that was unpleasant, weird and just a bit denigrating. Don't know if that was the intention but this definitely not one of my favorite chapters, I think I will just gonna a skip over and hope next time he actually gets to rut a lady, are met in a better term and Anon is view as a individual rather than a pet.
I think that was mostly the turn off, that after all the crap that has going on she keep viewing as a animal and not an equal like her friends…and she keeps looking him like that to the very end. That was unpleasant to read.
Anyway, does things happen and I still wish to see how he deals with boobs so hopefully next client will deal a bit with that aspect.
My vote is for Mayor Mare. With as hard as she works and no special somepony she needs the release that Anon can give her.
10552634
No lie, I rewrote this whole chapter like three times and I wasn't really happy with any of them. (Part of the reason why it took so long).
To be honest, I kind of wanted to make it a rule at the beginning that Fluttershy couldn't be one of the choices, because they could keep on the slow burn romance through the whole thing, and he could separate his work as a stud from his actual love with her. And he could warm up to the idea of actually 'making love' to a pony that was a different species from him, rather than just feel like he was servicing them.
But she became the overwhelming choice so early on, and I didn't want to end the story so soon. Plus there was the matter of Discord, whom I didn't want to just write out of the story to allow for Anon to have a relationship with Fluttershy, because I have a lot of fun writing him and wanted to include him in the future, even just tangentially.
Because of all of these factors, it was exceptionally challenging for me to write myself out of this narrative corner to maintain the "episodic status quo". This doesn't have to be the end for Fluttershy's story, as I strongly hinted in the author comments. Maybe her view of him will change in the future... unless somepony else catches his eye first.
You decide!
10552634
Milky Way, then?
Or perhaps Mrs Cake?
10552647
Aw I see, well you can make a rule,
-You can choose whoever you like EXCEPT the mares in this list because they play a part later on.
It your story after all, you make the rules. And that is good, she only need time to repent and that could work for a character ark. But for now, I wouldn't blame him if he requires a break from all the mares, so here is an idea for the next partner. A bipedal creature, coming to Equestria as a visit or because Discord wanting to make peace with the human.
Either a sexy very tall minotaur, or a resident from Abyssinian either choose tourist wanting to meet the elements and see the castle of friendship, after obtaining the book of Twilight. What do you think? Give Anon a break from all this crazy mares and go back to something he is a bit more familiar with at least temporally?
That could even work as a wake up call to the other mares that if they don't treat him well, he could just pack his bags and move to other nations that treat him better.
10552653
Or Ms. Cheerliee I always thought that lady could have pretty big boobs.
This was frustrating, and also amazing. I love the interactions here, and if Fluttershy can understand animals then there really is very little difference between Anon and her vs her and a pet.
Discord's interaction was spot on in this setting too. I can't even imagine Anon being upset with him over it.
You know, I'll bet Fluttershy would talk about this to Rarity during their spa visit. She may just be curious about such a considerate lover.
10552677
Thank you.
That was my rationale as well. As I commented earlier, this was a challenging chapter to write. But that is the point of this story, to challenge myself, which is why I didn't make any character restrictions for readers to choose. The path of the story may not go the way I personally would have intended, but I try my best to do the characters justice along the way. And I'm glad I was able to accomplish that here.
10552653
I agree wholeheartedly with the Milky Way option. Maybe have her become genuinely interested in Anon or something like that. We don't have enough of the pretty milk mare. Though, I do wonder how he will react to her milk tanks.
Rainbow Dash. As we have learned she likes coming to the Spa for some relaxation, and after a hard day of flying around she could be interested in the new massage that Anon is offering.
Grampa gruff
10552684
Well, this assumes that the animals are as smart as a human or pony. Admittedly, some of them seem to be and I don't think Fluttershy would recognize much of a difference either way.
The ending to this chapter was so awkward for poor Anon. On the other hand, Pinkie Pie clearly needs to throw him a moving in party!
repetition
me [maybe]
Rarity would be next, now that flutters knows how he is, and some mates know, she may be interested.
10552797
fixed, ty
wow emotions
Celestia
I applaud for Fluttershy not being the love interest as that seems little bit bland.
Anyway, I think it is time to introduce the main villain of the story so it has little bit of plot.
A Changeling
That last part where Fluttershy realized she done trucked up. 😂
All this time they started off on a misunderstanding, poor anon. Whelp, time to drown might-have-beens with work! Oh wait, he can't do that either....
This chapter was almost tragically dreadful, literally. Not the most exciting, but just about everyone in it is now disappointed. 😇
10552936
Yes, we need to get a changelings' input!
Unexpected but reasonable. I hope they stay friends, it wouldn't have been awkward if they had informed him beforehand and he had agreed to it - and who knows, maybe they'll do it again once he's more comfortable with stud'ing and has had some time to heal the wound to his heart.
Flutter's still in the wrong tho.
Oof, feels bad man, good to know Discord is so open-minded though. All in all I think the chapter will be good for the development of the story, even if it hurt our man Anon.
Ugh. Was going so well until Discord popped in. Then ya lost me. But I'm just a jealous bastard when it comes to Shy. And Pinkie...
Edit: I apologize if I come off as cross or anything, like I said I'm a bit of a jealous bastard when it comes to Shy, so I'm really not a fan of just about any ship involving her, especially Discord. Who you pair her with is your choice, and all I can do is move on.
I'll go against the grain: this was my favourite chapter yet, and I look forward to seeing more.
The chapters were quickly escalating, and sex seemed to be the fast-approaching endgame. You can have as many variations as you want, but it will just get repetitive after that... Unless you shift the focus of the story to something else, as you cleverly did.
Now it's about finding someone that would consider him not a pet, not a commodity, but an actual partner. And yes, having Fluttershy and Discord treat him like a common animal was a 1-2 gut punch... But it worked wonderfully in establishing the kind of challenge he is going to face going forward. Being accepted as a person (or stallion) is much more difficult than getting perceived as a useful commodity (as his clients might do), and it is something that he will have to actively overcome.
I think the story now is full of potential, and I hope you will really leverage the challenge he faces going forward!
Also, as much as I usually like Fluttershy (And her way of thinking is, if not excusable, at least understandable as she can talk with animals), I kind of hope she will not actually get with Anon in the end... Unless she really redeems herself. Her words and actions really show that she didn't understand why Anon was Upset.
Still, I'm glad they didn't end the scene on too bad a note.
You threatened Anon? Why?
I have my reasons
Meanwhile in the Boutique
You don't like Anon?
He's too different and he lacks claws
And?
Well he also hasn't scale one on his entire spider monkey gorilla faux body
So it's shiny things she likes
Discord put his thingy back on! Right now Mister!
Shouldn't this be "Sometimes this would cut off circulation."
As for who might be next... I vote Trixie!
He being considered a pet should have elicited a stronger emotional response.
10553350
fixed, ty
10553243
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I'll say it once more. Ms.Cake. Milfs need some relaxation too!
10553354
True. That should have made him extremely angry. He wanted to contribute to society and pull his own weight. He didn't want to mooch off of her in comfort and forgot all his potential for an easy home and sex like the other "Pets" did. And even with her sole ability to understand animals. That does not excuse her treating him that way. Everyone can understand anon and he wants to be a part of society. The pets had who knows how long to form even a pseudo-society with their "Sentience" yet they didn't. Why? Because they aren't sentient like everyone else. They're still animals. And they're all too happy to stagnate and live as animals accomplishing nothing and never advancing.
Of course. being the only human and looking VERY different makes it difficult for anon to be seen as anything other than a convenience. Like the marshmallow said.
10553243 Yeah, It was a very good way to introduce and make VERY clear the challenges ahead though. Definitely effective. And I actually see this as a nicer way of doing it. Instead of making some rando OC who is terrible and makes everyone mad. This was surprisingly a very delicate way to do it when you look at it after the 1-2 gut punch is over.
Def will be watching this one.
Bloody hell! Your full of surprises! This chapter had enough twists and turns to keep Discord mildly amused
Well done
Fluttershy the exotic dick craving fiend
Who will earn Anons heart? Perhaps Twilight? Anon is quite the speciment
Maybe the Lunar virgin needs to be serviced? Hmmm Moonpie~♡
Luna ♡ Because Moonpie is best pie. Since he already get his dick wet perhaps the DBZ fusion end position to get Luna going like the goddess deserv
That honestly threw me for a loop, I did not see a romantic connection with Fluttershy at all. Did Anon just get his hopes up because he hadn't gotten properly laid in a while?
10553586
Most likely.
Huh. So a chapter of this, and two chapters of Cat's Cradle on the same day.
....Welp, let your scientist colleagues know that diamond is no longer the hardest substance on the planet.
And thats why women don't bang nice guys.
They don't understand casual sex and read too much into things.
The Monk
“it sounds like they're describing a bacon-flavored dildo with a 10 horse motor.” -Dan_s Comments
Songbird Serenade or Countess Coloratura.
nice work
10552647
It was interesting how you made this scene really feel like a shock of cold water.
Like this entire bit enforced the fact that Flutters, for what ever reason, saw Anon as a pet; I was originally gonna put animal, but every creature in Equestria is an Animal.
You wrote this in a way that it make it feel like no matter what he was not gonna satisfy her or any mare just with sex alone.
Sex in a relationship is suppose to be mutual, and seeing as he can't do that does make me think that might be a problem for him later.
Added to that the was she is 'disgusted' by his confession...
I hope later on we can find out why she considers Anon to be a pet, and not other beings in Equestria...
Of is that just something about Flutters that she does not see a real distinction between All beings
Rarity
Aww, poor Anon. Flutters just doesn't know what went wrong! It was kinda fun seeing the tables get turned on her, though.
Good stuff, looking forward to finding out who will be next!!
10553862
Honestly, this comment is why the modern world is going to die. Women can't have a perfectly healthy baby past 30 and act like frat boys who can fuck around forever. They have a time limit. Men however don't lose the ability to produce sperm. Also, it's why women believe the lie that if they spend time making a career that the perfect man will show up. They chase around the top twenty percent hoping to make a husband, but that won't work because they don't have to settle leaving the woman lonely forever.
Edit: At least she had nice one night stands though.
10552684
I've figured out why this chapter soured me so thoroughly, and this touches on it. Unfortunately, I think you just undermined the serious portion of the story.
First off, a disclaimer: I may have misread the tone of the story and set myself up for disappointment. If this is just meant to be a silly kick-the-protagonist, porn-logic cringe-comedy clopfic, my bad, I'm in the wrong here. However, if the worldbuilding and psychology were meant to be serious parts of the story, you just gutshot Anon.
Anon's been trying to find his place here. He's been struggling with his identity and purpose. He thought he just found it, but he's had ample confirmation that he's never getting anywhere (even if that isn't true).
Anon's just had ample evidence that he's never going to be more than a living sex-doll for most Equestrian mares. He can't be a real stud, he's not a real person. Even if this is not universally true, he's going to be a mess for a while, and it paints this version of Equestria as a pretty shitty place for non-ponies.
That was a bit of a twist, but to be fair, Shakespearicles was leading up to this happening. Still sucks though. The only slightly up side is that it happened with Fluttershy.
Good job!
10554078
Everything is about balance. Both examples (the male and the female) given are both examples of extremes.
When you remove grays and only have extremes, your right, the world burns.
The Monk
Don't shoot the messenger. You cant fix whats broken if no one points it out.
Monk
“There are many ways to create a monster, and the one the girl knows best is rather basic: you tell someone they're a monster over and over again, then wait to see how long it takes before they agree with you.” -Estee
10554231
I don't blame you it's just that Tinder and other apps like it have destroyed dating as it was. You no longer have to form a bond or take time. The best looking men have a literal hold over any woman they see. Those women think those men want to be only theirs, but the truth is much worse than they know.
Or they're just s*&%$ looking to get it on with whatever will. To that point I'd say have fun, but don't look for meaningful connections later because you threw that away early on.
10554114
Its the holidays, I have to do alot of running around, so excuse this quick response. I have a lot to say about this chapter so I will come back this evening and give a longer one.
But for now, I find it humorous that what unsettles you is what pisses me off about 90% of the HIE stories on this board. What you mention is EXACTLY how humans act when it comes to sex and relationships with ponies in most of the stories. (EWWW, its a pony, thats bestiality. I know you and love you, but your an animal.) read your comment and reread it as the humans thinking and you really do have the mental outlook the Authors give their main character humans.
It really is over done and ridiculous in my opinion.
As for serious, any story about the green Anon cant be taken serious. In my opinion this is a tongue and cheek story, the problem you have is the one I did as well. This one starts out serious and promising with almost no cringe at all at first. It became a spoof later as the story progressed. It took me some time to switch mental gears as well.
Monk
“and brought her muzzle to his ear. “If you so much as hurt one little hair on her head, I’ll feed you to my cock,” she hissed.” -Some Leech
10554246 10554252 10554114
Or maybe I really was just trying to push the reset button on Anon's 'romantic' progress as subtly as possible before things escalated too quickly in the story between him and any one character and ended the story arc prematurely, and any suppositions about 'this version of Equestria' or social meta-commentary are entirely your own, not from any authorial intent and maybe we all just need to have a nice tall glass of chill until the next chapter.