For the next chapter i vote for a S CLASS STUD OFF Boss Battle between Mr Anon & Prince Nova Sparkle (Final Fully Grown Form). In an epic copetition to see who is going to be The Ultimate Master Mare Masher Measure of the Multiverse with all of Equestria Watching them in an arena where every mare is on the massage tables of mashing.
I nominate Queen Novo. Let Celestia enjoy gossip with her old friends and the mare got curios about the misterious stallion, fuel by missing her departed husband. Fish or Bird or both, you decided I'm not picky.
Heck Anon can became a mermen and screw under the sea! If you prefer as well.
If not I nominate an Abissian lady. I want to see if Anon can make like a Tigress Abyssian purrs like a kitten.
Mayor Mare sure is a Drama queen that can teach Rarity something Zecora is a rhyme mistress. Mayor Mare a drama mistress. But i wonder if Spike can make it right and become Anons Assistant Nr.1? Little dude can need a male role model
I want to express my appreciation for both your take on Mayor Mare and her problems (and proclivities) as well as the the sheer willpower and stamina to commit to that cavalcade of political pony puns.
Ocellus because free given love/lust is the sweetest ♡
Did someone care to read, enjoy and upvote the comment section? I tell you the upvote limit is reached waaay to fast Waiting was never more challanging
The comment section has great level of Stickybug jokes but the story itself might need one
Just out of curiosity, did ever anyone accend to Queendome from the Changelings in your head canon?
So... Here i was... Auto re-reading like 20+ times this chapter... Still PRICELESS puns... Funny how a singel chapter can keep me entertained for hours
"Curse your psychic human powers!" she said, putting the folder back in her bag and getting up onto the massage table. "Alas, my tail flags so!" She said as she laid on her belly. "Why, at such a display, it would be of no effort for you take complete advantage of me, and I'd be utterly helpless to stop you from rutting me to completion! Such a fall from grace! For a mare of power to be brought low and degraded so, for dirty money! I'd be forced to endure your human penis sliding in and out of me for minutes! Several even!"
I just lost it at this point...
Joking aside (or is that joking inside?) this chapter was a lot of fun with the double innuendoes. Also really loved hearing the mayor complain about Twilight shenanigans.
Pinkie and her sisters might need to be brought in as teacher’s aides for this class. Miss Cherilee has been subtly hinted at due to the references to Big Mac’s marriage. And AJ been conspicuously absent. I also look forward to the subplot with Chrysalis progressing.
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Nice, and I certainly didn't expect to see a reference to an unpopular point of topical politics in there. Can't wait to see who you get for the next chapter.
For the next chapter i vote for a S CLASS STUD OFF Boss Battle between Mr Anon & Prince Nova Sparkle (Final Fully Grown Form). In an epic copetition to see who is going to be The Ultimate Master Mare Masher Measure of the Multiverse with all of Equestria Watching them in an arena where every mare is on the massage tables of mashing.
Still want to see some hate cucking with Starlight Glimmer!
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I nominate Queen Novo. Let Celestia enjoy gossip with her old friends and the mare got curios about the misterious stallion, fuel by missing her departed husband. Fish or Bird or both, you decided I'm not picky.
Heck Anon can became a mermen and screw under the sea! If you prefer as well.
If not I nominate an Abissian lady. I want to see if Anon can make like a Tigress Abyssian purrs like a kitten.
That was funny all the way from the time she unbound the file folder until the end.
As soon as this was spoken, I knew it was that kind of chapter. Thank you for the laughs.
I think Gabby could do with some relaxation after a long route of delivering mail.
nice work
Lunas mercy, the puns... I love them
This is the best chapter of the hole story. The comedic level is breaching god level
PINKIE PIE
Because noone party as hard as she can make him cum all over per party favors
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You are a Legend. I should name a child after you
The hay has nothing on these rolling puns!😂
Derpy Hooves, fuck her so hard her eyes go (un)crossed
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Limestone Pie! she's real tense, and everyone likes to see the grumpy one's armour crack.
the beauty of a pun is in the OY of the beerholder . .
The political puns were fucking on-point.
Mayor Mare sure is a Drama queen that can teach Rarity something
Zecora is a rhyme mistress.
Mayor Mare a drama mistress.
But i wonder if Spike can make it right and become Anons Assistant Nr.1?
Little dude can need a male role model
How about a surprise stress relief visit from Celestia do to Luna's actions again.
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Chapter 16...
Maud pie. Anons dick game is so strong she actually shows emotion. Like normal pony level of emotion or even pinke level.
The flurry of puns and a fresh (in the bracing minty sense) take on Mayor Mare's persona definitely gave this chapter a bolster.
We got Limestone listed, Maud, and Pinkie. So my vote goes to Marble Pie, because conquest in so few words is the ultimate challenge.
I still say bonbon
I want to express my appreciation for both your take on Mayor Mare and her problems (and proclivities) as well as the the sheer willpower and stamina to commit to that cavalcade of political pony puns.
Tantabus
Hmm I'm half tempted of proposing Cozy Glow at this point ^^;;;
Hey so first off that was some of the best pun work I've ever read. You should simultaneously be awarded a medal and incarcerated.
I'm glad Mayor was bluffing, I was pretty shocked that business expenses from earlier that week were somehow late reported on the previous tax year.
Ocellus because free given love/lust is the sweetest ♡
Did someone care to read, enjoy and upvote the comment section? I tell you the upvote limit is reached waaay to fast Waiting was never more challanging
The comment section has great level of Stickybug jokes but the story itself might need one
Just out of curiosity, did ever anyone accend to Queendome from the Changelings in your head canon?
Sir, this is the joke police. We are here to revoke your pun license!
This chapter has been like a cool drink of water at the end of a long, lonng ass walk in the desert. Noice!
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Honestly my vote goes towards anyone in the pie family or may be Octavia.
Also great work on all the puns.
So... Here i was... Auto re-reading like 20+ times this chapter... Still PRICELESS puns... Funny how a singel chapter can keep me entertained for hours
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Absolutely PRICELESS ♤
both damnit and thank you for the puns
Granny Smith and Goldie Delicious. 'nuff said.
I just lost it at this point...
Joking aside (or is that joking inside?) this chapter was a lot of fun with the double innuendoes.
Also really loved hearing the mayor complain about Twilight shenanigans.
Pinkie and her sisters might need to be brought in as teacher’s aides for this class. Miss Cherilee has been subtly hinted at due to the references to Big Mac’s marriage. And AJ been conspicuously absent. I also look forward to the subplot with Chrysalis progressing.
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She was an earlier chapter but if I recall correctly was the only mare to get blue-balled by Anon. I do wonder what became of her after that preening interruption.
Nice, and I certainly didn't expect to see a reference to an unpopular point of topical politics in there. Can't wait to see who you get for the next chapter.
Gold!
Nice way to have him command her end, chief.
Dear God, the puns…
genderbent spike as barb :P
The puns, oh gods the puns!!!
You're madlad, I love it
Miss Harshwhinny could be tough to please.
This by far is my favorite chapter!
Sure enough, Anon is soon after helping the landlady with her garbage.
Incredible read as always.
Since it has been a week, maybe we'll get more information about Discord's deal.
I hereby nominate Stella Sabre, if Flam's cool with it, Anon needs a dose of Thestrial Scottish vocabulary in his life
is it too late to nominate diamond Tiara?