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I loved this! Btw, you forgot to mark this as complete.
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I might make more chapters to it. So, I am leaving it open. HIE where a human does not have a penis explores the world or something.
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Ok. I'll track it then.
This is great man
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Glad you liked it.
There some others like it. It's part of the 'Pony Anatomy Problem' universe. There's group on fimfiction for it if you want to read more like it.
I'm not sure if I like this story or not. It has an interesting premise but as a stand alone it leaves me a little confused.
Good job Discord, Think he really believes in lovecuddles?
Discord put his penis back right now mister!
Twilight how could you?
He just can't stop drinking,,, Sometime soon he's got to pee or he's going to explode... Ka blamo!
He did feel a little squishy
This was a interesting story I hope he gets his dick back in the future.
Jesus Christ, vary up the lengths of your sentences some. It's REALLY distracting when every single like is a simple sentence.
For instance: "Yet, this night had a very unusual colour to it. It was not like any other night you had seen before. The night appeared to be lavender."
This could easily be one sentence, and would be much more interesting and easy to read.
I was surprised at how many stories you've uploaded, because this very much reads like someone's first attempt at writing.
In the future, try reading your story out loud after writing. You should be able to hear how it sounds like a kindergartner writing an essay.
Well, this was a strange read. But a very fun one nonetheless. Great job!
BRO i found this randomly! now i've just read how anon would react if he wasn't a Brony and the ponies are all peaceful and there is even more sentience to the everfree beasts such as the Manticore, MEANING THIS UNIVERSE WOULD BE EVEN MORE PEACEFUL THAN THE ACTUAL STORY WHAT THE FUCKKKKKKKKK