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Your missing a with before something in the short description
...vore. why did i even click on this
Nice story.
A few words are missing, but I like the story. If you'd like some help adding the missing words, I'll be happy and willing to help
Like here. You're missing a know so it'll be.
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I don't see why not. If it's not too much trouble, could you have look at my other stories? I feel like they're lacking the proper gramer as well
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Sure. I'll look them over and pm the edits to ya. I'll get to work on the mornin'
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I understand. Have a look when you have time.
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Wasn't that made obvious when you saw the cover of this story? Why indeed. Yes, I say, why did I read a story about vore, knowing that it disgusted me when all I had to do was pay attention to its title and avoid reading it altogether. Am I the only one that sees how honestly dumb that question was?
(Edit): I'm pretty sure I know who disliked this comment. Could it be the very person that this comment was directed towards? Oh boy, mission accomplished!
remember to use hooves and hands respectively
also, there's a massive paragraph that should be broken up(don't worry I struggle with the same issue) the best way is to change the sructure into monologue or narration if you really need to explain something
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I dont think he heard you the problems still exist but I kinda wanna see where this story leads
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figures
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I've been looking over the part you pointed out, and I still don't see anything wrong with it. Also, sorry for not getting back to you sooner.
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You need to add MLP EQG tag to your list of series if this is equestrian girls or other such things most of us think it is MLP feral horse rarity, not human rarity
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The story isn't set in the EQG universe. But I will think about your suggestion.