Princess Luna wants to be a mother, but hate the idea of a one-night stand and adoption. Fortunately, she knows a spell that help with her wish. Along with three special fillies.
Contains [unbirth/ slight hyper pregnancy]
This story can take anytime before season 9
Editor: Applefai
You really could use more details
The story seems good, but I believe it would work batter as a oneshot than a multi chapter formation.
should grab celestia unbirth her.
I sometimes dream of Princess Luna ubirthed me since I am human being inside the night Princess and I as her human foal . ( of course I would be a girl or a human filly . )
I would like to do or have a story done of me somehow coming to Equestria as a human female from the USMC as a sniper . My squad were killed and I am the last survivor . Bleeding from bullet wounds keeping the enemy at bay , I begin to weaken losing my strength , I lay with my pack and equipment when a Taleban with a big ass sword comes towards me and is about to chop off my head but suddenly the Lunar sword appears in my hand giving me strength to fight . Grasping the sword in both hands I fight him, and counter his strikes untill I find my opening and kill him by shoving the Lunar sword through his chest and out his back severing his spine killing him . ( To Continue ) Would this story be interesting ?????
huh interesting
I think you should reformat this in to a one shot whit som time stamps instead.
It would propably read beater that way.
Other whys it is a cute story and I will read more.
Seems like Luna has ACD.