Up Here in the Mountains

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Sweetie Belle and Rarity have moved away from Ponyville, much to Sweetie's disgust. She hates the quiet and the snow, and she misses her friends. But all is not as it seems in the mountains, and a stranger is coming to visit...

A bit of a speedwrite, completed in about 2 and a half hours. Let me know what you think!

Chapters (3)

Chapter 1 · 18th Sep 2020 · 2,118 words
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Chapter 2 · 18th Sep 2020 · 2,218 words
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Chapter 3 · 18th Sep 2020 · 1,006 words
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Comment posted by -Pinkamena_Pie- deleted Sep 19th, 2020

The Chronicler

The Chronicler #2 · Sep 19th, 2020 · · · Chapter 3 ·

Hmm... Is it Actual Cannibal Shia Lebeouf?

Unity Bringer

Unity Bringer #3 · Sep 19th, 2020 · · · Chapter 3 ·

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Please spoiler this. ^^;

(The deleted comment below was from me accidentally posting twice this. My apologies!)

Comment posted by Unity Bringer deleted Sep 19th, 2020

zx29b

zx29b #5 · Sep 19th, 2020 · · · Chapter 3 ·

It was very respinsible of Rarity to take Sweetie Belle to that mountain far from Ponyville. She knows that when little things get pushed around, they just might destroy the town.

Inthretis

Inthretis #6 · Sep 26th, 2020 · · · Chapter 3 ·

Well this was an interesting twist on Sweetie Bot. Its short length made it so that the story didn't overstay its welcome, and the reveal was a great chapter and confrontation, revealing quite a lot in only a few thousand words.

Comment posted by fanreader999999 deleted Nov 4th, 2020

BirdsBooksBrownies

BirdsBooksBrownies #8 · Nov 4th, 2020 · 3 · · Chapter 3 ·

Twilight should probably go visit herself or perhaps send an order (along with some nice stallions with white coats) because Rarity clearly needs help.

Wolfeh05