[2nd-Person Fic starring you and Twilight Sparkle]
Singularity. Solitude. Loneliness. All three words describe the same thing: your existence. Knowing only one other being of your kind, you've grown sick of what you are and that which restricts you: your form. With your form comes an innate sense of anonymity, one you are forced into obeying by one thing: your family. Down in your spirits, you long for a life among those who you're forced to avoid, a chance at replacing it all with the help of one creature: your newest friend.
A/N: Finally, the Twilight Sparkle story I've been teasing at so much. Differing from my previous works, this one comes with a different set of 'legs,' you could say. Ha, get it, because you don't really have...legs...hm.
Just wanted to see what direction I could take the idea of seaponies in. Hope it turns out well!
Enjoy, folks!
Art by SubjectNumber2394 of dA.
sweet new story
2 people read it, 3 thumbs up
Lolbronies
Update: 5 for 18 now. Lolwut
This seems really interesting, plus you can never go wrong with a good romance!
Yay!
Looking forward to where this goes.
octopus, i say octopus from the start. havent read, but i'll see if my prediction is true. dont spoil it plz.
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da mean he likd to
To the read later. and I couldn't finde the quote so song a go go despite wrong tone.
Kody has a new story?
Like and fav dat shit now.
EDIT: Do seaponies have cutie marks? And can they breathe out of water?
5 views, ten thumbs. Lol wut? XD Still, SEAPONY me? EPIC! Insta-fave and reading tiem!
...i like it! update more often than most please.
Sea ponies!
This is a first for me! Cheers!
>At first glance, I suspect humans in equestria with Twilight Sparkle.
>Super excited.
>Reads description.
>Seaponies
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I suspect seeing Twilight for the first time would have a similar effect on me.
Wait... DAMMIT! Only one chapter! I shouldn't have read this yet! ; ;
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I didn't read it yet, but I'm predicting a feature box. Place your bids now everypony!
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Wat
Love it so far, but I hope you explain why seaponies cannot be seen by surface-dwellers. I know the rule is supposed to be vague but... it's freakin' vague.
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Sorry Im rtoo astoopehd fer life.
He mustve liked it, so it had jaun ewr juan b4 pobnies viewd ed
Well.... Your story is awesome and I like the idea of seaponies, but the only problem is you only have one chapter out but I want to keep reading but I already finished this chapter so you need to wright the next one because... I WANT IT NOW!
SHOO BE DOO MOTHERFUCKERS
SHOO BE FUCKING DOO
I think seaponies do have cutie marks, but i'm not certain.
Head-canon is having difficulty with this.
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New Kody story?
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Keeping in line with everyone else's reactions... static.fjcdn.com/pictures/MOAR_5f44cd_917839.jpg MOAR
A new kody story. YES
How have I not heard of you before.
Favourited and watched.
I'm a seapony? Color me intrigued. I'll be watching this fic, that's for sure. You've really nailed the relationship with my brother; I hate him in this fic almost as much as I hate my older brother in real life. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Also, when I saw this: "The little guy was rather cute once you get past the lack of a face."
I thought of this:
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Linnaeus is best jellyfish
You have just unlocked one star and thumb
I found this song to be somewhat fitting.
Shoo be doo
Shoo shoo be doo.
Please sir, may I have another?
im intrigued as this is my first fic on seaponies im excited for this thumb and tracking do no dissapoint (^w^)v
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Dude. Excited level- indescribable.
Need more.
Nao.
this in an incredible intro!
Regardless of comment responses, color me intrigued by your premise, and I can't wait for Twi to stumble upon him while he's gathering pearls.
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Wat.
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Let me give my best guess as to his troll response.
Well, my life has been made. If you need me, I will be drowning my sorrows in food.
New Kody fic? With me and Twilee being shipped?
Awkward moment when myself and Twilight Sparkle have almost identical personalities.
"Just wait you'll see, Someday i'll bee... part of your woorrrlllddd!" Yeah, just remember that forks are not combs now.
But in all seriousness. this is very intresting!haven't seen many stroies with Seaponies, I"ll be looking foward to see where you go with this!
Apreantly the seaponies call on YOU when they're in distress.
No words can express how happy I am now
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boom
I think I'll watch this... Just because I like it.
Be proud. I haven't been much of a reader on this site since my tech endeavors, but your story has captured my attention.
moar please? this is bucking AMAZINGLY AWESOME!!!!!!!!!
I'm sure it's unintended, and you may not have even read it, but this feels very similar to a sea pony x Rarity fic that's out there. Not that that's a bad thing, I'm looking forward to seeing more.
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I actually have read that one. Truth be told, I was planning the romantic party in this story to be Rarity at first. I swapped it in favor of Twilight, not only to avoid the idea that I was copying, but I just thought out a better storyline for Twily.
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My story included seaponies, too. They just weren't featured characters. I feel sad that nobody was excited about seaponies when they read me. Perhaps I'll feature them in another story down the road.
Here, we have the Kody. Silently making 2nd person fics to appease everyone.
Hm. I havent been tracking new stories for the fact.i have plenty still updating but I will track this.
pardon my ignorance, but what exactly are seaponies? somepony fill me in.
Sounds interesting.
...Not entirely sure how this romance is going to work. Maybe Twilight has a "Give-Legs" spell?
Hmm... This looks interesting...
Well then! Time to go and read all the other ship-fics!