During a joint graduation party for the students of Canterlot High and Crystal Prep at Sour Sweets mansion. Sci Twi gets an e-mail back from the tests Sunset and Princess Twilight agreed to let her conduct on the genetic profiles only to discover that Sunset has human DNA and may not even be a true equestrian.
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Really just really. Flash is dating Derpy.
"Take me up to Canterlot city,
where the grass is green and the mares are pretty.
OOH, wont you pleas let me home~"🎤
Oh come on. You left on a cliff hanger!!! No fair.
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Heh yeah. After the times derpy showed up to pat flash on the back when sci twi ran off during the friendship games and then sunset during camp ever free. I could see her having a crush on him
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Wallflower will have a killer hangover in the morning
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Chapter two is being written as I speak
Well, this looks like it'll be fun. The moment when the Twinlights were teasing Sunset by doing the synchronized thing was adorable, as was Sunset and AliTwi's conversation about Sunset asking out SciTwi.
Sugar's playing with Azidoazide azide by taunting Sour like that.
And of course something ruins the moment. But, at least they got to the moment. Lets see where it goes from here.
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Glad to see that you like it so far
Soooo, is Sour going to peel Sugar like an orange? 'Cuz it sounded like she might.
And our mystery deepens. Hopefully Dr. Flatline's going to have some answers.
Can't wait to see more
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Definitely. Thanks for watching
I hope some of these kids know what condoms are for or else there is going to be a whole lotta regret in the morning. My high school graduation party was so boring I ended up walking home after a few hours and yes there was underage drinking and making out. Human DNA, okay, let's see where this goes.
Okay, I like this, but I need to point out a few things. First: slooooow down. I can tell you don't have a beta reader and I know it's exciting to publish a new chapter, but you have a few very basic grammar and punctuation mistakes here like capital I being a little I and missing period at the end of a sentence.
Second and this is a nitpick for a fanfic but when using real science it's important to get it right RH negative is not a blood type. Blood types are A B AB and O. Overview. Rhesus (Rh) factor is an inherited protein found on the surface of red blood cells. If your blood has the protein, you're Rh positive. If your blood lacks the protein, you're Rh negative. Rh positive is the most common blood type.
When can we expect a new chapter????
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Shortly. I've been very busy with work. But now that the holiday season is over. I should have more time. Thank you for your patience
Isn't that where the grass is green an the girls are pretty?
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It is. New chapter is nearly done
You can has review!
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How does that work? When they go to the human world they become human