Azure's definitely taking the whole "two copies of the same girl" thing in stride. Though it is still fairly abstract in her mind. Seeing both next to each other might be a bit unusual... though she could just contextualize them as twins. Really, the whole town has a touch of Sunnydale Syndrome given the increasingly flagrant magical shenanigans.
No reflection on you, Sunset. I didn't get any sort of sexual response from kissing you.
(sad audience noises)
“She's not going to try to experiment on my mom, is she?”
Um, phrasing? Though I suppose "on" rather than "with" is an important distinction here.
Let's just hope Twilight's analysis of Azure goes better than Sunset's study of magic.
Something I really really appreciate about this concept...
Is that Azure Flame never actually flirts with anyone. She's friendly. She's pleasant. She's kind-spirited. But she's not a "tart" or some "sluttish" stereotype. And, on top of that, you went out of your way to make sure she's not a "bimbo" stereotype either. She's intelligent, accomplished, and industrious.
She just happens to be oblivious, far removed from any semblance of stupidity. Is it naive of her? Maybe, but I think her self-assurance and general love of life and for Flash and his familiars eliminates any opportunity to perceive her own observational shortcomings.
This is key... because you're establishing a character who is objectified--yes--but it doesn't particularly feel mean-spirited. It doesn't have a negative connotation. And I really, really appreciate that. You should be proud.
Instantly, Twilight's head snapped around. “Oh my god! For the last time, the moon landing was NOT faked! Why is it people STILL keep insisting on this idiotic conspiracy even fifty years later?! It would cost MORE money to fake that kind of thing in 1969 than it would have to actually GO to the damn moon in the first place! Sweet merciful Einstein on a bus, it confounds me how willing people are to blind themselves to the – what are you two laughing about?”
Honestly this right here made Twilight hotter than Azure to me. I hate Moon Landing Hoaxers, Flatearthers and science deniers in general.
For a hot second I thought they were going to need to send Twilight in for a factory reset. Funnily enou, this incident also involved a shade of blue...
Oh heck. This is really really good for so many reasons. Like 10449716 said, the biggest and most amazing single feat you've managed here is that it's not putting Azure into a box where she is being degraded. This is a lovely, somewhat silly story, that goes about the topic of overt and one-sided attraction and objectification in a manner that doesn't leave you feeling bad about in any way.
So now we move on to the next installment, which has Azure Flame meeting the human world's Twilight Sparkle, and all the inevitable shenanigans that will ensue.
Well, apparently, Azure's (non-intentional) sexual charisma is so powerful it can make girls fawn over her, too. Truly fascinating. I feel like there's a trope for this scenario, but which one(s) escapes me.
Somewhat unrelated topic, I loved Flash's interactions with Sunset and Twilight in this chapter. Funny how the guy can get along well with both his ex-girlfriend and the doppelganger of his last crush.
Now I kind of want to see a flashback of when Sunset first met Azure.
… So, uh... Don't ask. I've been kind of wondering something... Don't. Ask. Regarding Azure Flame... DON'T. ASK. What are her measurements? OH, YOU NIMROD, YOU DID IT!! YOU JUST COULDN'T RESIST, COULD YA?!?!
Poor Flash. And poor Twilight as well.
Oh dear. She's now curious about the effect that Azure has on people. I really hope that she doesn't try to pursue this... XD
Azure's definitely taking the whole "two copies of the same girl" thing in stride. Though it is still fairly abstract in her mind. Seeing both next to each other might be a bit unusual... though she could just contextualize them as twins. Really, the whole town has a touch of Sunnydale Syndrome given the increasingly flagrant magical shenanigans.
(sad audience noises)
Um, phrasing? Though I suppose "on" rather than "with" is an important distinction here.
Let's just hope Twilight's analysis of Azure goes better than Sunset's study of magic.
Buh?
Something I really really appreciate about this concept...
Is that Azure Flame never actually flirts with anyone. She's friendly. She's pleasant. She's kind-spirited. But she's not a "tart" or some "sluttish" stereotype. And, on top of that, you went out of your way to make sure she's not a "bimbo" stereotype either. She's intelligent, accomplished, and industrious.
She just happens to be oblivious, far removed from any semblance of stupidity. Is it naive of her? Maybe, but I think her self-assurance and general love of life and for Flash and his familiars eliminates any opportunity to perceive her own observational shortcomings.
This is key... because you're establishing a character who is objectified--yes--but it doesn't particularly feel mean-spirited. It doesn't have a negative connotation. And I really, really appreciate that. You should be proud.
Honestly this right here made Twilight hotter than Azure to me. I hate Moon Landing Hoaxers, Flatearthers and science deniers in general.
Flash really need a girlfriend that could take his mind off his mom unconsciously arousing everyone.
For a hot second I thought they were going to need to send Twilight in for a factory reset. Funnily enou, this incident also involved a shade of blue...
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Oh heck. This is really really good for so many reasons. Like 10449716 said, the biggest and most amazing single feat you've managed here is that it's not putting Azure into a box where she is being degraded. This is a lovely, somewhat silly story, that goes about the topic of overt and one-sided attraction and objectification in a manner that doesn't leave you feeling bad about in any way.
A+
And just like that I love your depiction of Sunset SHimmer.
Again, best Sunset Shimmer so far. But SciTwi's reaction is funny tool.
I think I really love the humor so far in this story. And then Twilight kisses Sunset XD
Hah! Twi gets nuts over moon landing hoaxers!
...And now she wants to study Azure. This oughta be good.
This is very believable. Flash seems like the kind of guy who would have a really hot mom.
So now we move on to the next installment, which has Azure Flame meeting the human world's Twilight Sparkle, and all the inevitable shenanigans that will ensue.
Well, apparently, Azure's (non-intentional) sexual charisma is so powerful it can make girls fawn over her, too. Truly fascinating. I feel like there's a trope for this scenario, but which one(s) escapes me.
Somewhat unrelated topic, I loved Flash's interactions with Sunset and Twilight in this chapter. Funny how the guy can get along well with both his ex-girlfriend and the doppelganger of his last crush.
Now I kind of want to see a flashback of when Sunset first met Azure.
… So, uh... Don't ask. I've been kind of wondering something... Don't. Ask. Regarding Azure Flame... DON'T. ASK. What are her measurements? OH, YOU NIMROD, YOU DID IT!! YOU JUST COULDN'T RESIST, COULD YA?!?!