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Unwhole Hole


Digging it deeper. Always deeper.

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Celestia and Luna package and box Cozy Glow for her final trip to eternal torment in Tartarus.

Starlight shows up and becomes displeased.

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That ending.

Well. That was... a fic.

What... did I just read? I feel as if my head needs a reboot of some kind

“GAH!” She began flailing her legs wildly. “Sister, help! I have been inverted!”

This made me snicker. Great Celestia line.

I sort of wrote it for a contest I heard about. There was actually a super-dark original version that was much longer, but I thought it was too pretentious.

I would be interested in reading that as an additional chapter.

“There are! And they’re apparently enormous, six or seven times the size of these nubs.” She pointed at the guards.

Celestia and Luna looked back at their tiny guards, and then at each other.

“Stallions that are not...tiny?”

“We shall consider this. Later, sister."

They're going to have very special offspring from that. I wonder has anyone explored the idea of a feral, nonmagical stallion with sentient magical mare offspring yet ?

I guess some people went bananas... and they're not even on the moon.

“Who the buck is Spoiled Rich?”

Someone who apparently looking to replace her birth daughter for failing at bullying school children.

Deep down in pony-hell do they drink pony-wine
And ring a pony-bell to mark the pony-time?
Are the days pony-swell and the nights pony-fine
With nuts in pony-shells and songs of pony-rhymes?
Or do they pony-yell about the pony-crimes
For which they pony-fell and sadly pony-cry
In that dark pony-well where no light pony-shines?

I feel like spoiled rich just got the burn of a lifetime with cozy glow the sociopath.

Ah yes, Satin. That evil fabric.

Im dissapointed with how toned down you portrayed the Princess' own self-rightousness

They're 10 times worse than this in the actual show

:trollestia:

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Nah, it's worse:

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The "Random" tag is missing.

Edit: No more...

“A would inflicted by an alicorn horn can’t heal, even by magic. Witcher rules. It’s why Twilight doesn’t date anymore. No. I have something much, much worse.”

Wound, I imagine.

I was laughing the whole way through. Starlight at full magical power is an awesome thing.

I'm pretty sure this needs a "Random" tag. Also, :rainbowlaugh:

Becoming Spoiled Rich's adopted daughter might be a worse punishment...

“That’s not the point!” Starlight put her hoof on the bridge of her nose. “You do realize that I enslaved a village, right? And that I then destroyed the timeline, like, twelve times that Twilight knows about? As in, I didn’t even conquer it, I DESTROYED it! And now I live in Twilight’s house and eat her food without paying any rent at all!”

This made me chuckle. It shows how ridiculously lucky Starlight was.

Wait, I've got it! Cozy Glow is secretly a fully adult exmoor pony! Smol, resilient, full of rage against the 'three tribes', sometimes uses grating baby talk—it's so obvious now! Glimglam you fool, let them send her to pony hell!

When I read that title, I was expecting something more serious...
But this works too :rainbowlaugh:

well that was... interesting...?

Big horses.
We all saw those fanfics.........

No! Bucking Spoiled Rich! Any pony but her!

Damn I missed your newest story until now. That was awesome.

Ok. I liked this one. Spoiled Rich? Yeah. Makes sense. If anypony can do it he can. Never liked the whole send Cozy Glow to Tarturus thing. Can't see it. The later seasons went off the rails (JMHO), so thanks for fixing it.

“She was banished to a land utterly devoid of stallions, with only ugly bipeds so she will never possibly ever have any sort of romantic satisfaction.”

That's not going to stop her from having a good sex

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