This is well written, and pretty creative that you adapted the skyrim lore into MLP. I can't help but think that if Alduin was sent to Equestria in any form he would just annihilate everything with ease. I'm anxious to see whether or not when he does become full once he more just looks at Celly and says "This is it? Really? I'm a dragon, ho."
Pretty damn creative work there. It's good to see him have a really believable reason to be in Equestria instead of the usual "Oh no, my portal broke!" that I see so often in crossovers. Tracking this bitch like the Fist of the North Star.
Hm, while I applaud your originality and the obvious quality of your writing, I have to admit that I don't care for the idea of Spike being Alduin. I LOVE crossovers, don't get me wrong, but the idea that a canon character of one universe is actually a character from another universe in a different form is.....annoying, to say the least. Nevertheless, I am intrigued as to where this story will go and have every intention of following it.
Only 2 things sense your not that far in 1)if at any time celestia is to fight and if she is to loose dont do that crap where she's basically nothing and gets taken down like a little weekling yea she can loose but she's still a virtual god she should still give a truly crushing fight. 2) didn't celestia pull the egg out of the fallen rock why would she assume the family died wouldnt it be obvious that it was what fell from the sky?
4945319 im sure that will be expressed at a later chapter where celestia meets Akatosh and explains what happend and everything leading up to the event.
6175043 You didn't pay attention to what was spoken between Akatosh and Alduin did you. He has to be the opposite of what he was in Skyrim. There he was the END of ALL. Here he can be a hero.
This is well written, and pretty creative that you adapted the skyrim lore into MLP.
I can't help but think that if Alduin was sent to Equestria in any form he would just annihilate everything with ease.
I'm anxious to see whether or not when he does become full once he more just looks at Celly and says "This is it? Really? I'm a dragon, ho."
So, Spike is Alduin. WHAT A TWEEST! Just make sure you keep a steady head on this project. Looking great so far!
Wow, there's a mass of skyrim stories being written now but this is obviously on a different level than them.BAWWS
Incredible. I cannot wait to see where this will go! Oh Spike, you crazy dragon you.
I loved it.
Catchy. I'll be watching with all my eyes.
You could use your fancy fire and ice....sure, sure...or...you could use...
THE WAABAPPLEJACK!
Huh? Didn't expect that did you!?
-Sheogorath with a pony pun on the Wabbajack
77194 I almost laughed at that but then I took an arrow to the knee.
Anyway, you've got me hooked! Keep up the good work!
So Spike is Alduin reincarnated. Interesting
Pretty damn creative work there. It's good to see him have a really believable reason to be in Equestria instead of the usual "Oh no, my portal broke!" that I see so often in crossovers.
Tracking this bitch like the Fist of the North Star.
Hm, while I applaud your originality and the obvious quality of your writing, I have to admit that I don't care for the idea of Spike being Alduin. I LOVE crossovers, don't get me wrong, but the idea that a canon character of one universe is actually a character from another universe in a different form is.....annoying, to say the least. Nevertheless, I am intrigued as to where this story will go and have every intention of following it.
Sovngarde...
How a MLP: FiM/ Skyrim crossover not rated 'teen' is over my head.
Will keep reading because this looks good.
Well, I haven't played any of the Elder Scrolls games but I hope it won't really matter.
At first, I thought the disembodied voice in the Void was Sithis himself, but it was actually Akatosh himself. Way to create suspense.
Akatosh is kind of an annoying hypocrite, calling someone else a child and then yelling at them to shut up when they say something he doesn't like.
Only 2 things sense your not that far in 1)if at any time celestia is to fight and if she is to loose dont do that crap where she's basically nothing and gets taken down like a little weekling yea she can loose but she's still a virtual god she should still give a truly crushing fight. 2) didn't celestia pull the egg out of the fallen rock why would she assume the family died wouldnt it be obvious that it was what fell from the sky?
4945319 im sure that will be expressed at a later chapter where celestia meets Akatosh and explains what happend and everything leading up to the event.
Oh, shit! SMASH IT!
6175043
You didn't pay attention to what was spoken between Akatosh and Alduin did you. He has to be the opposite of what he was in Skyrim. There he was the END of ALL. Here he can be a hero.
And so, MalKeyAar was born.