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Be careful what you wish for...

Reading it through I kept finding myself pausing to imagine all the sexy imagery through out the story.

Whether it was "comfortably smuggle multiple watermelons", or a "distinct lumpy bulge where her bladder was" or just a cock and balls filled with... well...balls. XD

There was just so many scenes to imagine and all of them were so hot and kinky!

The pool ball bladder insertion made me think a lot about unbirth to a degree but on a smaller scale. But still very graphic in all the best possible ways. Especially when it comes to seeing into Glimmers bladder through her gaping ruined urethra.

But still the best scene had to be the one with Glimmer and Double Shot pushing the pool balls out of her bladder/urethra down Double's own urethra. Its such a fun scene to imagine and you captured it nicely. :)

Great update and can't wait to see what you come up with next!

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Or you just might get it.

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Thank you. That actually means a lot to me. I work pretty hard to emphasize imagery, cause it's kinda the most important part of a clopfic. Admittedly, when I did the first editing pass, none of the interesting parts actually happened, so I'm glad I decided to go back and redo it.

As for what's coming next? I have no idea! I mean, I can hazard a few guesses, but it's anybody's guess as to which one of my upcoming stories I'll finish first. The only thing I can guarantee is that it's going to contain anal of some sort.

It's quite rare to find urethral or prostate content on fimfiction, but this some nice (If light) combination of both, I would love to see more of that from you with either males/shemales or futas.

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Well good news for you then, I have a fair amount on the way! As soon as I finish it.