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I can find absolutely no words to describe how much I love this story
I would have to invent a mishmash of 5 of the biggest praising words in the world
You've blown me away with your two stories. (not counting the shorts one)
I thought your previous story was as good as it could get but you sure showed me huh?
EEEEEEEEEEEEEYYYY SEXY LADY
Sent by DbzOrDie
Oh yeah and 1358964, I swear I'm gonna report you for bringing something as perverse as Gangnam Style into this website
1358973come on man. JOIN THE HEARD
1358973
"perverse as Gangnam style." in a comment on a clop fic.
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or did you just really want to use that pic?
You didn't actually think I was serious did ya?
1359054
I found it funny. And yes, I've been wanting a reason to use that pic.
Dominant Dash. "We like it rough." Mhm.
This also seems like Dash's payback from "Bridle Gossip."
Win, as always. Love your work, keep it up!
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This story is simply amazing! I can't even think of ways to tell you how much I loved this and I hope you wright what AJ's turn on Rarity is like
Deal with it
1359061>>1359054 guy's i think we might started a gangnam style thread
Yummy.
Amazed! just... that... Amazed!
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kinky
1359431
and your problem is?
1359706ABSOLUTELY NOTHING
Just finished reading and it's pretty good I guess. Not into this 'uncomfortable-paininmyvagina' fetish but I guess it wasn't so bad of a read.
AJ was all like
then Rainbow was like 
and Rarity was like 
An excellent story!
1360024 It's not really a fetish, I guess
It just shows the lenghts she's willing to go (or not since she nearly called the safe word)
I have to say, that particular part consisting only of a few lines, you sure picked a strange thing to focus on
> this is gangnam style thread
I must say I'm not into BDSM, but this story sparked my attention and it's one of the most delicious one I've read. You have my favorite
Very smooth read.
I loved it. Nice to find an author with SoulHook quality writing that doesn't make me wade through a page and a half of backstory before I get to my clop. (Not that that's a bad thing, sometimes I like that story-clop combo, but sometimes I just want to get off quickly and go to bed.)
I also enjoyed the 'racial' stereotype play that was going on. It added an emotional complexity that was just so, so hawt <3.
Fav, will read again, and again, and again...
1358923 Splendtasticiouscrediblerific?
That's how I feel too. If they take turns, as AJ says, you gotta write the reverse of this. Lassoe Dash!
Seeing Applejack going through all this mental torment was spectacularly interesting and fun to read. I was a little disappointed they didn't head into town or at least a stroll around some secluded outdoor area, but all in all great great work. I hope you got another chapter in you
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Interesting idea. Arousing as all hell, and I have t agree the racial angle added an element of intrigue. Superbly done.
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Well done!
I would like to comment on the outstanding quality of what I just read, but my brain is refusing to comprehend it. I read the words, but while my mind was putting their meanings together and forming images, it gave up and said "I can't handle this ****."
I've read a good number of clop fics (something I am slightly embarrassed to admit). I've even read a few with some... rougher elements, but nothing even remotely near the same level as this story.
That being said, it was excellently written. Very well done.
You managed to do what very very few "scenario" (as opposed to "natural") clop fics do. Keep things 100% ethical and not simply defer to the "fantasy buffer" (it ain't real) that so many authors use to justify hardcore dubcon in clop. You generated an incredibly kinky and hardcore sex scene while keeping the reader explicitly aware that the characters were engaging in this as their own fantasy for the sake of mutual pleasure and love.
Although, I have to say I felt the tribalist overtones seemed inverted. Usually the "lower breed" is the one viewed as animalistically virile in those types of scenarios.
The traits seemed a bit inverted too. AJ was refusing to be honest about things going too far, Dash was not being very loyal to her lover in pushing things so far, and Rarity was not very generous with her playmate.
Also, I felt the realism fell a bit short on 2 counts.
1: You NEVER EVER bring a surprise player into the game, unless that player is already part of the club. AJ not at least temporarily breaking role to talk it out is very unrealistic.
2: You do not ram an unlubed, oversize toy into a reluctant and unprepared (stretched and relaxed) orifice unless you are planning on having the recipient die of toxic shock syndrome.
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I rarely respond to comments in my clop, but I did want to address one of your counts.
For count 1: Rarity also disapproves of this at the end, to which Dash responds "We like it rough." I meant that to indicate that they allow a certain amount of edgeplay, since Applejack enjoys it almost as a competition, or at least a personal challenge- more RACK than S.S.C. She also clearly had the opportunity (after the knock on the door) to stop the scene and respond, and gave Dash a nod to go ahead, though whether it's ethical to renegotiate a scene when the sub is in sub-space seems to be (from what I've read) pretty controversial.
This also goes into AJ refusing to be honest and Dash pushing. AJ enjoys the tension of forcing herself to her limits (the personal challenge thing). It's not so much that she's being dishonest with herself or Dash, it's that she wants Dash to push her exactly as far as she can take it. But of course that line depends on a lot of factors, so at several points in the story she's trying to decide if she's about to be "there" or "too far." It's stated up front that Dash's domination is one of the factors that let's her push herself further, so when Dash gives her the extra push (no pun intended) in the insertion scene, she's able to push herself further, and seems to feel she made the right decision.
Dash, on the other hand, has always seemed to me to have a sadistic streak. Along with her competitive personality, she'll keep pushing until she hears the safeword. But she is listening for the safeword and making sure that AJ has opportunity to use it.
Count 2: Totally right. I did go straight into fantasyland there.
1388179
Cool. Thanks for the reply then.
After more thought, I retract my assertion of OOC behavior, but add a character analysis.
For Dash I would say it's not sadism. Dash will attempt insane stunts with the goal of pulling them off at any cost. She will never abort. If she flubs the trick, she crashes. She's not clumsy or stupid, she just does not give herself a safety net in order to motivate herself to succeed. This is the kind of behavior I see mirrored in this scenario. Except vicariously, as she is pushing AJ under the same principle. It almost seems like hero worship. She wants to see something awesomely impressive.
But that means she it trying to manipulate AJ into not using her safety net, her safeword. She want's AJ to either surpass all her limits or "crash and burn".
1388307
That's a beautiful bit of analysis, and this is a beautiful little clopfic
I think my favorite part is Applejack's true role outside of subspace, at the end. Hell yes, that's her saddle- she earned it, and it's really her call. I like that.
Well, I'm suprised, that I liked it...
I'm not into S&M stuff, but I'll rate it up.
Very Erotic
I liked the story! I thought it was a great mix of humor, sexiness, and each character felt genuine! I thank Hurricane Sandy for giving me the time to read this! Thumbs up! Oh, and I can't wait for a sequal
Gangnam Style can eat my dust because im digging minecraft style
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Gangnam Style can eat my dust because im digging minecraft style
AMAZING!!
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Awesome work and you mixed back story to explain things instead of just clop
you mixed great writing and clop
Well... I must say... this fic left me awfully flustered, so to speak.
I smell a sequel.
1919860
Where dost thou smell such a thing?
2008620
maybe it's coming from the pile a juices on the ground behind you.
personally, im a Twidash person, but this was pretty good itself