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A typical morning turns into chaos when an old feud ignites between a princess and a trickster. The reason being? The last slice of chocolate cake and only one reigns supreme. It's a fierce battle of comedic proportions as Discord and Celestia try everything to get the cake for themselves. You have been warned!
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If fans are looking for a humorous take on the friendly rivalry between Princess Celestia and Discord (At least when Equestria is not at stake), look no further when these two start budding heads... Over cake. Now, that being said, why on Earth would Discord try to have 'cake' in the morning? It's certainly not like gathering hot cakes that's for sure. But anyways, there is tons of hilarity that ensues that is almost reminiscent of two best friends fighting over cereal. The best way to describe this story is if MLP meets 'Looney Tunes' which all the more makes it enjoyable for two types of fans.
Sequel: Baked in Cake,
Celestia find out how delicious she is when she gets baked in batter then glazed over with creamy frosting.
10389734 Depending on how well this does, I may consider it. But I take it you liked it?
10389775
He did express an interest for a sequel. It must be a sign that they would like to see where the story would go and what further shenanigans 'could' ensue.
Oh my, that ending was perfect!
I liked this idea, and it really was a silly and cute fic (I found myself chuckling a lot
), but I found it to be a little too wordy. There were a little too many adjectives and descriptions that - I felt - prevented the story from flowing as well as it could have. And I usually don’t give constructive criticism because I don’t want to come off as rude, but I figured, if it were me, I’d want honest feedback, so here we are. 
Keep on writing - the more you do, the better you get at it.
10406779 I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll admit I made it more... wordy because it was a consistent criticism I kept getting with some of my stories. I'll try to find a balance someday but your advice is appreciated. Thank you
10406791
That’s a difficult balance to find (I can’t say I’ve worked it out yet, by any means) But the other stories of yours that I’ve read were really good in that department, so don’t stress about it. 
I have no doubt that you’ll get the hang of it!
Oh, I see
10406796 It's alright. So long as people enjoy them, I'm fine with a mistake here and there. Also, on a side note, I plan on posting a story once a week until October. There will be a surprise in store then
10406819
Oh, sounds delightful! You’ll most likely be seeing me around then! Is there any particular theme you’re going with or it’s random?
10406834 Story is out btw
Oh man this was a riot, I kept laughing at all the references and jokes.
Great job.
Also Celestia totally spoonfed Discord her share right after.
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That was generally the whole idea. When SunTwi asked me to make this story as funny as possible, I knew the fans weren't going to get one of those 'emotional rollercoaster' stories that the critics are high in demand for. We wanted our viewers to have a laugh at the antics these two push on each other and all for something as simple as a slice of cake... For breakfast, let me remind you. And in the end, we love the way this story turned out. Granted, there were so many other gags we wanted to experiment with and try, but if we do decide to do a sequel for this story there's always room for more, maybe even some 'slight' improvements (But there's no guarantee, we write the way we feel like it).
Please tell me you made this up? I don't know anything about the production for Friendship is Magic (except that most of the writters needed to be beat upside the head with a baseball bat for all the stupid they had happen).
But I didn't think the voice actors were from Canada. Some, or any of them.
"I’m singin’ in the rain,
Just singin’ in the rain…"
Okay. Unless you changed the words to the song, this story should've been deleted. You are NOT allowed to use song lyrics in a story.
If it's a Friendship is Magic song, you're okay. But it's a site rule you're not allowed to use non MLP songs.
10558218 A)That wasn't me who made that line. My editor added that in so I have no idea if it was a joke or not. And B)As for the song, I didn't write that either. He added that in so... I'm assuming so. But I think as long as it's not just ripping the song, I think its fair game. But from the way you portrayed it, it almost sounds like you dislike the story for that.
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I actually like the story (people are way too sensitive). Just surprised that the song is there. If someone can confirm it's been changed, you're fine.
But if this is word for word that song, then the story is in trouble.
10558574 I can't confirm or deny it since I don't know the song and I didn't ask. Worse case, I'll just remove that bit and that should fix it
Trollestia!!!
Rainbow laugh multiplied by infinity
This story is so funny!