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Twilight had a plan: she would take Nightmare Moon to the map, she would teleport away from Nightmare Moon, get Spike out of the clutches of the Lunar guards, would teleport to the time portal and go back to fight Starlight Glimmer.
But unfortunately, Nightmare Moon was faster than she was and managed to stop her before she managed to get away from her. Now, she has Twilight at her mercy and she has an idea of punishment to give for the purple alicorn.
Contains: Bondage.
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Ah, would you perhaps happen to mean personal?
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Sorry about this error, I will correct
10375769
Ah, 'kay. You're welcome.
10375842
Thanks, and just to let you know, i already fixed it
Cool story. Although, It would be better if it wasn't a one shot.
10375844
Indeed, I saw.
Good idea for the story.
I don't remember having read something like this before.
That being said...
Found already two typos in title and short description:
Should be either "for" or "of".
Should be "for".
There are serveral more all over the story.
Seen separately nothing bad, but the quantity is simply too much to ignore.
I recommend you getting an proofreader.
Constant whiplash
this night.
10378300
Sorry about this mistake. It's fixed it now
10378312
It's okay.
10378312
Please continue this story. I know it was a one-shot, but I want more of it.
10382089
I don't think I will want to write more chapters for this story, because while I was writing it in the drafts, I already had in mind and planned that this story would just be a What If one-shot fanfic.
10382112
Oh. Okay.
To quote Nightmare Moon from a pic I found and with it based off of her famous eternal night line from the show
"The snuggles shall last forever!"
get stunk? Don't you mean be stuck?
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Yes, sorry, but it's fixed it now
she would say that the night is not meant to be eternal as all life would perish,
"Oh no! You will not escape from me!" Nightmare Moon caught Twilight quickly in her magic grip before the younger alicorn could go into the portal.
Because of this, the portal disappeared from sight since it was activated already.
10405305
It's fixed
10405309
It's fixed
So why didn't her plan work?
her mane started blowing in the wind
from Nightmare Moon's guards
I need more of this.
So cute! Thanks for the fic!
I enjoyed this story. But I don't see why the tragedy tag is on since there were no deaths.
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This marked as tragedy because Twilight failed to escape from Nightmare Moon
10782405
Oh okay. I thought tragedies meant deaths.
Isn't Nightmare Moon's magic turquoise?
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Sorry, i just corrected
put a hoof close to her mouth
I NID MORE