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Keyslam


Write with intent behind every word. Say hi to Tonkus for me. :)

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An interesting piece that brings out the curiosity in my mind. There are many missing pieces of the story left for the reader to decipher, such as how did this human transcend to this reality? Or how did the human adapt to the life in Equestria? The story leaves many experiences to be inferred from their conversation, as mysterious as the knowledge of the number of the stars in the sky. Yet, this piece is emotive and it brought out the sense of the human's lack of belonging in this alien world. Nice work, but I wonder whether that streak of light in the sky will return again...

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Thanks for reading!

Hello, I posted a review to your story here. I hope you find it helpful. :twilightsmile:

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