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NaughtSought


read it for the errors; enjoy for the story

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As a sort of look through my own mind I came across something unexpected; ponies littered about. As I looked at them, they looked back and began telling me things. Now I talk with them as they go about their duties in hopes of finding out about them and just why they would appear in my mind.

This story basically centers around psychologically profiling ponies within the show. I will be taking liberties since I have yet to see it through to the end but most things seen will be as cannon as possible.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 8 )

I'm afraid I have to disagree with Mr Timetraveling here. I'm usually a fan of these sorts of stream of conciousness things, but this one doesn't really provide any imagery or insight into the mind of the narrator. As far as I can tell, it's just a string of meaningless sentences.

Oh my god you wrote it. And it's very interesting! I can't wait to see where this goes. My arms are now flailing in excitement! I can't stop!
...........Send help.

1166831I haven't the faintest idea what that artist in a box thing is. I can totally agree with you on not liking it yet since not even I am sure where this is going... And what is EQD?
1167202Do you want me to say I'm sorry for it being like this? The point of it was that it seemed to just be a random stream of thoughts.
1167409I also can't wait to see where this goes and I'm the one that wrote it. i do not exactly plan my stories out in their entirety before I post them. I have a general idea of what is to happen but the path to get there is never planned.

1167570

I'm not asking you to apologize for anything. I'm just stating my opinion.

1168755And your opinion is a fact. It is just a stream of thoughts comming from the narrator.

1168626 Whoops! I only now noticed I never responded to you. Actually, I know of Equestria Daily but there are problems with it that prevent me from ever using that site. Nothing major but I will probably never have the ability to use it.

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