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It's funny how Murk's world feels so much smaller (or maybe I should say lower-level) than most fics. This is a place where an SMG is as rare an terrifying as a minigun is in "standard" FOE, and a single potion is a rare and miraculous resource.
Nope, sorry, you're already "Red Eye, Jr." in my head.
Huh, did KKat's story actually say that the people Red Eye sends into the stables actually kill everyone they find? I always assumed that they just killed the ones who resisted and enslaved the rest.
(chapter 3)
So... right before he got shot, I remembered it was a tragedy... and then when Red Eye Jr. Showed up, I thought that was the end... And then it got worse... and then it got slightly better.... and then it got worse again.... and then it got even worse. I.... You would make Shakespeare proud.
I started reading this story due to high recommendations from some folks on a horrible, evil website that you may well know.
Gotta say this is interesting. I have a few complaints about how it's a bit repetitive in places and I think you use more words when less would serve better, but hey, you're the writer.
Probably my biggest gripe is that Murky talks waaaay too smooth and intelligently in his head than I would expect him capable of given his upbringing and all that. There are times when he's just too much of a Littlepip clone.
But all that aside, I'm still interested in reading more and this Protege fellow really got my interest up. See ya whenever I read chapter 4.
God damn, every break this guy gets just screw him over more.
Love the story, man. This writing is on a refined tier not too many people can every hope to achieve. Gotta say, the length of the chapters are amazing, you sure know how to pack in the most bang for your buck.
Really excited to see where this goes. Going to catch up with the rest of it hopefully tomorrow.
I hope that he finally gets that break he needs.
For the love of! You got to be kidding with me!
1490200 the fact that is so true just made me lol
but Murk is getting shitted on so hard...and he's not even out in the Wastes! I heard authors can bully their characters but this is just...just...torturing!!!
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Doesn't stop me from loving this story though
I wonder if Protégé's power level is over 9000. He's wearing a Scouter, after all.
Excellent chapter. The imagery of Murky getting shot was particually vivid.
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you think this is torturing the characters?
Blooming moon chronicles.
Nuff said
This story still is great though, and quite well written.
Gives Murky a comforting hug.
murky goin far cry 3 on dem bitches
Ugh poor murky, I just want to hug him and take him away from all this
If I have one critique of this story it is that murk can't really catch a break, a charcter with trials is a interesting one, but a charcter that is constantly knocked down without a chance to build back up is kinda boring.
The story is well written and flows well, But the size of the chapters makes it feel like no progress is really being made.
Besides that this is a quality fick
Sorry Murky, but LittlePip's barn door doesn't swing that way...
Wowie, tough luck 🍀( ͡ ͡° ͜ ʖ ͡ ͡°)🍀