"Now get me closer! I want to hit them with my sword!"

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A true beacon that all mortals should strive to achive.

Now somebody find that mare a Leman Russ.

For the empress!

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Or a Baneblade.

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eeehhhh baneblade is okay but give her a shadowsword, love that freaking super heavy tank.

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But Baneblade. Many much dakka. At the point in time when bullets can pass through the interdimensional walls, when firepower takes up the entirety and eternity of space and time all being stuck in a never ending life and death cycle as bullets recover and destroy their bodies in quick succession no one able to think about anything but the sheer force of the bullets rapidly flying literally everywhere in the materium turning the Warp itself into nothing but a sea of semi-automatic weaponry. Then there will be enough dakka.
Or at least almost.

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Dakka Dakka!! that sounds like heretical xenos talk all a real man needs is faith in the empress, his standard issue flashlight and standard issue Astra militarum cardboard armor. Please remain in your domicile unit Ordos Hereticus agents have been dispatched to summarily execute you. May you die painfully heretic scum.

Long live the empress

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As a representative of Her Holy Inquisition of the Ordo Mannulus, you are under orders to stand down or else I shall bring down upon you a Rainbow Laser Beam of Friendship Extermanitus.

Hail Fluffy!!

Okay, I can clearly see the many references between warhammer and fallout. And I can say with certainty and clarity that I positively LOVE how well you've managed to weave such drastically different environments and themes together in this story.

If I have one complaint thus far (beyond reviving the ONE villain I loathed the most!!!), it's that we haven't really seen the so-called ponemarchs in action and what makes them so special when compared to the rest of the army or the Nebula Guard. Really, the only thing that really seems to stand out is that they seem to be partially reincarnated versions of at least two of the Mane 6.

But, aside from that, I'm loving the story so far!!

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There's a lot of work I still need to do with the individual ponemarchs. I plan on expanding on them and their respective legions and have plans on focusing more on them as the crusade spreads out and splits up more. I already have the 10 ponemarchs general personalities and their respective legions preferred tactics and weapons figured out and one legion's colors figured out. I did put on a blog asking the readers to help with ideas on the legions color schemes, regalia, standards, traditions and any successor herds they may have and offered to credit their work in both the story's long description and the chapter notes they were featured in, but so far none have responded. If you wish to offer ideas, feel free to leave me a PM.