This story is a sequel to A World Above
Every legend begins from something. Or someone. Before and after Paraddock was created, there was one pony who longed for not only for adventure but a place to belong.
With his Lost Colts, his faithful companion Nicker Bell, and the Starling siblings, can Pony Pan face the nefarious Captain Hoof and his crew of dastardly pirates?
What a great start to the story!
Also, congratulations on your first story!
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Thank you for your comment, and your help.
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You're very welcome!
You have my attention
This is getting interesting.
Things are going great so far. I see you added a tweaked version of the talent ceremony from the Tinkerbell movies.
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Yep. I did.
The story's getting more interesting with each chapter! I'm excited for future updates!