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Jhoira


Time to write some fanfiction! Yay! If you have any thoughts comment! I find reading them fun!

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Rarity needs to complete one last task before she gets too old. She journeys deep into the Everfree Forest to complete said task.


Any of my long time readers know what goes here.

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Comments ( 11 )

Starting to stretch a bit to relieve some of the pain in her old bones Rarity shook her head. It really was a pain to be old. She did still enjoy many things in life. Though she couldn't sow anymore, she could still see the new fashions. Though her bones ached from long walks, she could still sit at a cafe and let the world walk by her. She found pleasures in life, but she knew that she was on the decline. She had to make this journey before she got to old to complete her last task for Applejack. Though admittedly it was one she had assigned to herself.

couldn't sew*

got too old*

Rarity didn't have to duck to enter. The passageway was absolutely massive. She looked about her, somewhat apprehensive to find what she was looking for, but determined to complete this task. "I don't know why I'm so nervous darling. I mean, what's the worst that can happen?" She paused, pretending to hear an answer. "Well, you are just a bag full of cheer today, aren't you? I'll have you know that I am going to complete this task!" Another long pause. "No, I do not sound like Rainbow Dash! She says that no matter what, I only say it when it's true

missing a period there at the end.

Short sweet little story, but the ending was a tad confusing. Did Rarity get killed by the Timberwolf? Or blast it into pieces but die at the grave? Either way, solid little story.

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D:

I shall never sleep again!

Honesty has now been properly avenged.

Generosity has gone out with grace.

Even after Calamity, Harmony still follows.

(Great work here, my good Jhoira.)

Whenever the kids were being inconvenient, they were Applejack's children, not her own. But when one was successful, they were, of course, hers.

That doesn’t seem fair.

"You ready to go, sugar cube? I've been waiting for you."

Wait, what?

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Hehe, wasn't meant to be fair.

And it's that Rarity died and Applejack has been waiting for her.

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If it wasn’t meant to be fair, was it meant to be what most parents say to make them look good?

Also, I was afraid of that.

Wow, I really need to read these tags. It was another solid story that I enjoyed reading. However, it was a little unclear if Rarity actually died in the Timberwolf attack or not, but the last line made up for it.

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Hehe, yeah, it was meant to be unclear until the very last line.

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