When Ashley Dusk hears that her friend Colorful Sound is the opening act of the Ponyville Music Festival, she and her friends decide to go there to celebrate! However, unexpected events keep life from going as planned, and Ashley and her friends are placed in the way of danger! How will our mares survive here?
I love it! Also, cool you added Flora there,
@Ashley Dusk Yeah, I felt that I should add her there, for some reason
amazing once again wendy , and, wow this chapter was out pretty fast.
@Ashley Dusk Yes. It's probably because the first chapter was written Thursday and because I uploaded it Friday, it made the 2nd chapter seem fast
aweshume again wendy, also, try not to ask me for alot of constructive critism other than the story line, because as you know, im a terrible editor but awesome story again
@AshleyDusk Thanks. I want to warn you about something that is related to the story: The personality of the characters in the story probably won't be relevant to what you see on their ask blog. This is because I'm developing the characters more like story characters than say...ponysonas
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i know, also you could just click reply insted of writing "@AshleyDusk"
1200459 Maaahh but I don't feel like it
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Even though it's mainly OCs, i think it's cool so far
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>> PuzzledPegasis Thanks I hope they're not too Mary-Sue or anything. I doubt they are, but if they are I don't think they're the worst ones there are. It's not really going to focus on any canon characters too much. Mainly, they'll be in background events, such as the Derpy scene in Chapter 4. Sorry if it's slow right now