Fluttershy loves her animals.
And her animals love her.
If only she knew how much they really cared about her, and how thankful they were...
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Elusive Phoenix
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This... this is too cute for words. I D'awwed. Have a thumb :D
D'awww!
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All in all this was very fun to read and adorable.
At that last line, just add "it seems,' and Twilight's BBBFF song gets stuck in your head. It's only a little similar, but it was more than enough for me.
THE CUTE!
IT HURTS! 
ME MOTHER FUCKING GUSTA!
Daaaaaaaawwwwwww.
Dawww..... Elizabeak is good chicken. ...Scootaloo is best chicken, but Elizabeak is very good chicken.
4/5
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When I was just a filly I found it rather silly
To see how many other chickens I could raise
I had my chicks to feed, didn't know that I would ever need
Other hens to make my life complete
But there was one hen that I cared for
I knew she would be there for me
My lil chicken, hen friend forever
Like two eggs in the coop, we would always be together
She taught me how to peck the floor
(hen friend forever)
She never had a single flight
(So we'd always be together)
We shared our feels, we shared our dreams
I love you more than you realise, it seems
Your lil chicken, hen friend forever
Like two eggs in a coop, you had always been together
And though you're not so far away
I hope that she could stay
My lil chicken hen friend
Forever
Forever
I had to!
1261338 Oh, you.
I liked this story. It captured Fluttershy perfectly. You got into her head. More amazing, you got into Elizabeak's head. Well done!
A suggestion, if you don't mind: instead of spaces, insert a section break (a centered "#" or "###") between scenes.
(Oh, and, "tune" instead of "toon", if you don't mind.
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1262113 Thanks! I've made those edits!
Dude, this is bloody adorable.
That was just, like, aaaaa. That got to me.
A bit strange but very cute. I almost want there to be more to this.
2331263 I may put in part of a series at some point...
Very, very cute, the other animals really do not get enough love
But you done very well with this, I really enjoyed it
This was amazng first time I read it. Gunna re-read.
EDIT: And also, since no one has actually said it: STILL A BETTER LOVE STORY THAN TWILIGHT!
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Awwww~
My feels...
4292913 My feels remain un-jibbled. I need to edit this BADLY.
Like Hourglass.
What do you mean? Is something missing or do you not like the way things are worded? I thought it was good just the way it is.
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4292976 I just feel like it could be...better.
4294167 Maybe an epilogue showing Elizabeak doing something for Fluttershy to show she cares?
Nice read though.
4704273 Nah; if anything, I'd just add that on to what's there.
Full review here, but in brief: not a setup I see every day! Or at all, really. Intriguing, but I so wish it went a little bit deeper.