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The blood staining her fur had hardened in the short time span she had done her things. The water tried its best to wash away her sins blood, but it could only get the weaker spots. She would need to use soap to clean the rest, but...that was something she couldn’t bring herself to care about at the time. 

Warning: Self-harm fanfic. Please don't follow in this pony's hoovesteps and get help if you're hurting yourself.

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Comments ( 13 )

Stories that are about self harm aren't really my thing but this one peaked my curiosity. I must say that I'm disappointed, because this entire story feels rushed, like it's been written in the afternoon or something. It just leaves the reader with many questions like what's wrong with scootaloo? Is she depressed? What's the reason to why she's hurting herself? You hint at it and never explain it.

I'm now just realising that this isn't scootaloo, you either used the wrong cover art or it's temporary, the raders might've gotten confused because they didn't read the tags and they thought it was a scootaloo story. If you're going to do another chapter or a sequel you might have to explain some stuff.

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It's hard to find a cover art with a self hurting pony, and it was between an OC that wasn't mine or Scootaloo, so I chose Scootaloo.

The story explains why my OC/author avatar bites herself; to release her anger. The very reason that lead me to writing the fanfic like I mentioned in the author's note in the top. She also bites herself when she felt too stressed out.

I even described the looks of the pony in the beginning, who has a horn while Scootaloo has wings. Their colors don't even match.

Are you sure the art isn't NSFW? I don't want you to get in trouble with the mods.

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-shrugs-

If it is they can tell me and I'll change it.

...you okay, Ruby?

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Haha, yeah. I didn't actually do this. This was just me releasing any anger into a creative way.

This is sad, but what's worse is that so many people go through similar situations to this. Still, why does this have so many downvotes?

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I wish people would comment so I could know.

I hope someone catches her in the act.

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Near the end, the ponies of the town are starting to get suspicious.

She didn’t notice the ponies that stopped to stare at her as she passed them, or heard their hushed whispers.

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Yea they are starting to get suspicious, but what if they get suspicious and then after a while they brush it off?

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The point was to show that she's not as sneaky as she thinks she is.

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