I was the Element of Magic. I was the saviour of Equestria. Now i am something more.
For millennia, magic in Equestria has been a force for good. Unicorns and Alicorns have used their spells for the prosperity of ponykind, and the Element of Magic has saved the land countless times, or so i thought.
I saw secrets of magic that far exceed the experience of any Alicorn. I have trifled with powers that transcend the Elements of Harmony themselves.
I have seen it all, and i have learned to control it from a master i though lost for the ages.
I walked the Road less traveled by, and that has made all the difference.
Chapters (7)
oooh, cliffhanger. ha. get it? cliffhanger? ....anyways, great story so far! A few grammar mistakes but still a joy to read.
The ending intrigues me... (cuz I don't get it !)
Oh and, son ? Make me proud.
"Subtle as a manticore at a tea party."
Definitely in the running for Simile of the Year.
Some feedback:
When another character speaks, put an indentation. This makes your story much easier to read.
Great story so far! Keep it up!
hmmm... i like this
"please sir, may i have some moar?"
This is good stuff here!
A Master of Magic should know all. Dark and Light magic is just different paths of magic.
Why is Celly afraid of the Dark?
It's not like Dark magic is Evil..... Right?
Make moar plz!!
Grrr!!
Celly is just being a magic racist!!!