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A boy named Jake get separated from his family but gets a new one. That being the crystal gems, Can Jake rise to the position of a leader at the age of 16, or will he and his new friends be destroyed by a strange yet familiar enemy?

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...you just... threw every show and game you could think of in a blender, dincha?

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If you are talking about Rick no, he isn’t my character

Interesting premise, this shall be Interesting. Though considering they noticed Steven was older, when are the Gems exactly in development? Surprised they didn't react to the Pink Diamond drop when Jake said it. Could make for an interesting talk next chapter. Hopefully the Ponies aren't the xenophobic type that take it to extremes but more show based and thus under the right circumstances are open minded to other species. Especially Celestia, her entire thing is meant to be kindhearted and open minded with regrets to poor choices in the past like how Luna was handled when NMM happened.

a deoxys gem i like the idea. I remember who can make clones and create a kind of aurora borealis in a pokemon movie.

despite its somewhat sad history because of the very rule-bound side of Homeworld. I'm so surprised she can see auras.

’I better give her a half-truth.’ I rub my neck and sigh. “Short answer shelter, t

I wont tell you simple stuff like why we are living here, but Ill tell you paragraphs and paragraphs about exactly what we are, all of our powers, how they work and that some of us can shape shift. Hell, I may even tell you all of our weaknesses.

But no, you cant know why were here. That could be dangerous!

I just don't get writers. This is not even uncommon. I came across a story where the main character refused to tell the mane six his name, because he didn't know them and didn't trust them, , then proceed to give an eight paragraph explanation on his complete list of powers, and all of his weaknesses. But hell, he didn't know them well enough to tell them his name.....

Why do you guys do this bizarre thing!

Monk

Ok,

Ive caught up and this is an interesting story.

Looking forward to more

Monk
“Come into my parlor, Ted. I have cookies!” -Reykan

am I lost here?:rainbowhuh: it wasn't Gwen who gave The Omnitrix to Jake who is technically a token.

unless it's one of his twisted jokes?:facehoof:

I heared this song twice, and make my cry, nothing but this and few others things did that.

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If the auras she can see is more like psikic-astral?

I nod. “Yes, because I have seen your type of person before, all you care about is money and reputation.” I then shrug and say. “Plus I'm still only 16 so do you really want to be seen with a child?”

Luna/Celestia: Oh, I never sawd someone that make Blooblood to shut up! https://images.app.goo.gl/1vNqLu3suTvAgWR99

“I’ll clean up this place first then head over.” Twilight said, levitating the books and began to put them in their proper place,

Me: What kind of witchery is this?! Twiligth cleaning by herself instead slavery Spike to do that?! You idiot! You breaked the natural order of things!

I smile and that warmth gets hotter and she puts her hands on my cheeks and we kiss and slowly close my eyes. As we kiss I feel the warmth in my chest grow but also leave my body and into hers.

*Zelda's Item found music theme* Congratulations! You youst upgraded to Changeling King!

I look back at her with wide eyes. “You're not Gwen, at least not the one I know! You're her version of Eon!” I frown, then smirk. “You are Gweon!”

Chile: *Fells identified*

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I nod and then say. “Well, it looks like we covered everything, so I suppose that's the end. I and Pearl can go home, oh speaking of that.” I pulled a stone book out of my gem and gave it to Celestia. “Amethyst found this in a secret room, I figured if it was hidden it must be best or something, best you take care of it then us.”

You forgot about the quantity of diamonds and it's capabylities.

“Ah yes, this book.” Celestia said, giving the book an annoyed look. “Thank you for giving it to me, I’ll be sure this thing is taken care of.”

The necronomicon or something alike?

I blush lightly and look away. “Sorry, um well Gwen's Logic said you were the key because Raven knows all about demons, so maybe you do too.”

Mmhhh Raven https://twitter.com/i/status/1174119710675353601

I nod and grin. “Cool! And maybe next time we meet we can see who has the better magic tricks.” I give her a thumbs up.

Then they heared a yell from out nowhere: The great and powerfull Trixie!

“Jake stop reading that! Didn’t you hear a word of what I just said?!” Twilight said,

Sorry Twiligth but we don't talk RACIST lenguage

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Thanks, sorry for the wait

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