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Raven Inkwell has served Mayor Mare ably for a long time, and it cannot be said that her time in Ponyville has been uneventful. But one day, when finally taking a break from her role as the Mayor's assistant, she instead goes to a certain other associate of hers.

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Gyro Pony

Gyro Pony #1 · Jul 9th, 2020 · · ·

What a great piece of world-building.
I like this one-shot.

Shadow_Wolf

Shadow_Wolf #2 · Jul 9th, 2020 · · ·

I really liked this

Scholarly-Cimmerian

Scholarly-Cimmerian #3 · Jul 10th, 2020 · · ·

Lovely little story, with some nice world-building and tying in to Season One.

Vaguely Demented

Vaguely Demented #4 · Jul 11th, 2020 · · ·

Very nice. Wonder what method Celestia has in place to know when to look for her.

Pony4Koma

Pony4Koma #5 · Jul 21st, 2020 · · ·

I love this head-canon of yours~

The only thing that's missing is explanation to Raven appearing and disappearing horn.

Ghost Mike

Ghost Mike #6 · Jan 21st, 2022 · · ·

This is a new idea on me, providing a kind-of explanation as to why we have Raven as both Mayor Mare and Celestia’s aide (if, understandably, ignoring the unicorn/earth pony difference). And a buildup explanation for “The Bird in the Hoof” too (presumably “Swarm of the Century has already taken place by now)!

The dialogue flowed well (even when it was a bit stiff at times), the pace was managed nicely, and the personalities of Celestia, Mayor Mare and especially Raven came through quite nicely. A rewarding little fic in both character and lore. Nothing exceptional, but well worth reading and an easy light recommendation, given the short length. I’ve added this to my Pretty Good folder.

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