1159983 I'd have to agree. It makes a story unnecessarily convoluted when the characters can't communicate. Is it just a spur of confusion, or can they really not understand each other?
This chapter was extremely well written, and the emotions were quite realistic. I found Fluttershy to be slightly out of character in her bravery, but I suppose I could chalk that up to necessity/strong empathy.
It's good to see you've taken my advice: 4,000+ well written words (minus a few grammatical errors) that explained what the first chapter couldn't in a nice, slow pace. Way to go!
Have a microscopic cheer for your monumental achievement.
Now, I think it's fitting to quote those highly respected on the internet in saying: MOAR (By which I mean, please continue. I would love to see where this goes!)
I for one am glad that there is a language barrier. It makes for a far more realistic story, as it doesn't make much sense that an entirely different world, planet and species would speak the exact same language as humans on earth do. I hope that it won't be solved with something like a translation spell or something, that would be kind of cheap. Of course, I'm not the author, so it's not up to me to decide. That aside, quite a wonderful story you have going here so far. Seems a more realistic take on the "human in equestria" concept where our human doesn't immediatly befriend all of Ponyville.
New chapter up! I hope this one tickles your fancies~
I had a blast writing it.
PLease tell me there going to brake the lauge barrier soon I hate it when theres lauge barriers.
I'm liking this idea, but seriously watched your people being murdered I would have laughed my ass off.
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Eh?
The language barrier?
1159859 yes sorry I washaving a mental brain meltdown
PLease do make more
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I'd have to agree. It makes a story unnecessarily convoluted when the characters can't communicate.
Is it just a spur of confusion, or can they really not understand each other?
Alright... You've hooked me!
This chapter was extremely well written, and the emotions were quite realistic. I found Fluttershy to be slightly out of character in her bravery, but I suppose I could chalk that up to necessity/strong empathy.
It's good to see you've taken my advice: 4,000+ well written words (minus a few grammatical errors) that explained what the first chapter couldn't in a nice, slow pace. Way to go!
Have a microscopic cheer for your monumental achievement.
Now, I think it's fitting to quote those highly respected on the internet in saying: MOAR
(By which I mean, please continue. I would love to see where this goes!)
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Thank you very much! I am flattered, and happy that you found it enjoyable.
As for fluttershy, I based her reactions on her manticore encounter. She was incredibly brave there as well, in hopes of showing kindness.
I can only hope I captured it correctly.
I am impressed. I love it. Please, do write more. I would very much like to see what happens.
Also, I sort of got confused a bit - is Krysta naked?
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Yes she is. Nothing that wasn't part of her body came with her.
I for one am glad that there is a language barrier. It makes for a far more realistic story, as it doesn't make much sense that an entirely different world, planet and species would speak the exact same language as humans on earth do. I hope that it won't be solved with something like a translation spell or something, that would be kind of cheap. Of course, I'm not the author, so it's not up to me to decide. That aside, quite a wonderful story you have going here so far. Seems a more realistic take on the "human in equestria" concept where our human doesn't immediatly befriend all of Ponyville.
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Ah, thanks! Will be hanging around, stalking in an inconspicuous way. Toodaloo!