This story is a sequel to Where We Left Off
Professor Haysworth, with the green light from Princess Celestia, resurrected Fluttershy, bringing her back in a pony-robot hybrid, Equestria's first cybernetic pony. It was a second chance to live her life and to enjoy the daughter she never had the pleasure of meeting. She was bought back home to her family, back into her husband's loving arms, but having her back after so long is a massive adjustment which begs the question of morality involved.
Liam the Human is taking it all in very slowly and cautiously, not sure how he should feel or think about the situation. Thankfully, his daughter is too young to understand anything. However, how will Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy's childhood best friend for life, react to meeting her again after a four year bridge? Will she accept it, or reject the idea? This is the story of Fluttershy's family's life trying to rebuild itself, along with old friendships that were put on hold.
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Death Tag - this is highlighted because death plays a prominent role in this story and is mentioned occasionally.
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Not bad. I think it would be stronger if we actually did not know what Rainbow was thinking and instead show conflict through other means. Now it sounds preachy, so it takes away from the impact a little bit.
Can't wait to see more. Keep it up.
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Fair enough. Writing a character's thoughts isn't a thing I do a lot (unless it's a drama or a story that warrants it if it's first-person), but I understand what you mean. It probably has some repetitive themes for stuff that's already been mentioned, too, but I think I'll get around to fixing it once I decide what I'm doing for the general plot for the story.
Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it! 💛
nice history, good work!👍