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Perfectly Insane
I've been writing for, like, 8 years, and I still don't know what I'm doing. https://ko-fi.com/perfectlyinsane
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When you see your real name in the description.
*Puts it in RiL*
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I actually used the name because one of my friends is named Jason, though personality wise its nothing like him.
Nice, there are some interesting questions to be asked here, like:
Is diane a total separate entity or is it just pinkie unwinding
If the former, how do they interact, like, do they remember each other's memories
Anyways
Rlly liked this concept
Godspeed
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Everything will make sense in due time, it wouldn't be interesting if everything was revealed at the start.
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1. Pretty good start.
- a.) Did not see any glaring writing errors on the first read-through.
- b.) A hearty Word Count is generally a positive sign, it shows you invested [time + effort] into your work.
2. A friendly point-out, you should also Source Link your cover-image: pinkamena, by DeviantArt(ist) Ta-Na. Doing so respects the fan-artists' works & efforts, and also gives you respectability as well. As the old saying goes, "Give respect, to gain Respect."
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Thank you, I will do just that. I usually would love to give credit to the artists of the images I use, but it isn't always easy to find it.
This is an interesting incarnation of Pinkie/Pinkamena/"Diane".
Even with pathos being "Diane's" predominant thing, she still feels enough like Pinkie where it matters, laughing and making jokes.
Bit tell-y at times, what with the main character also being the narrator, but I'm enjoying the story.
I'm actually surprised at how impatient I feel, wanting to see what happens next.
Is "Diane" just an alias Pinkie chose on the spot for this new friend? Somebody with whom she can indulge a part of herself that she can't with anybody else?
Will she have juggle these two lives at school?
Will Jacob realize what's going on when "Diane" is sporting a different hairstyle and demeanor?
Whatever actually ends up happening, I'm very eager to see where this goes.
Thanks for sharing your story here.
The comments seem good and the likes look great. You'll be put in the read later. Once there's a good few chapters then I'll read
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You can not even comprehend how worried I was no one was going to get that reference, since I made it so obscure. And you're right, the spin of Pinkie and Pinkamena has been done a lot. Don't get me wrong, I absolutely adore Pinkamena as a concept and have written multiple stories with that idea in mind. But even I can admit that the premise has been done to death, so I decided to try something different. I'm taking a lot of risk with this story and doing a lot of things I've never done, and right now, I'm trying to do it the best I can.
And also slightly hoping I get my first featured story, even if for a moment.
Damn! This is awesome! Can't wait for more
Not sure what I expected, but this was not it.
And I'm ok with that.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Fair enough.
Fortunately, I know the one you used well, DeviantArt(ist) Ta-Na has done many amazing (& sexy) fan-art works (not just MLP:FiM).
When a new story is posted in Pinkamena: Yay!
When said story is Mature: Aww!
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I'm sorry to disappoint. :(
I have to say I like the direction this story is going.
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Would love to hear what you think when you do.
Oooo I like the direction you are taking with pinkie and Diane split personality sort of thing.
I love this!
Damn, this is really good
Got the wrong species there, buddy
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Thanks for telling me.
I'm really enjoying this.
I’m liking the fact that you used one of Pinkies alter egos
And for that you got me hooked
realized that when I triggered a boner in my cock
Well I'm hooked lets see where it goes from here
Nice
Why is he not asking how she could see him, but he couldn't find her? Even when looking for her. I mean he practically blends into the crowd, whereas she is one of the only two bright pink people in the entire town, she would literally stick out like a sore thumb.
Sounds like she has been betrayed more then a few times.
Does she prefer being in charge because she has been betrayed to many times?
That sounds like something a prostitute would say.
Is she saying that because she has become almost desensitised to it?
That sounds like slut grade praise.
Experienced? what makes her so experienced. and when a female says 'a girl has her ways' isn't the most compromising, provocative option usually the correct one
Meet who about what? I'm very concerned.
Did someone find out she was a part time prostitute and use that as blackmail material, and in tern ruin her social life?
I know that Diane said she doesn't sleep around, but that might not have always been the case, after all only adult women, whores, sluts, escorts and prostitutes have that much Experience right, not a high-school girl right.
Oh what Pinkie, you invade someones mind as a split personality, lock them away and take over their life, and when you're ready you acknowledge them, and when they don't meet your standards, They are the evil one and you purge them from their own mind.
Do you think that's okey, Do you feel your actions are just, How can you sleep at night knowing that you all but killed the owner of that body you're wearing, How can you live with your self knowing that you are a replacement for someone you killed.
Maybe that's why Diane hates you, you are wearing her body like a puppet
This is getting really interesting!
oh. So it's Flutters then. ok
The only issue I have so far with this story is how much he spilled to the random group of girls he met for the first time. That was so SOD shattering that I had to stop reading for a bit. Like, that level of shy awkwardness feels like it would have been semi-paralyzed by the attention of so many girls at once, not spilling his guts about a very personal encounter at the drop of a hat to strangers. It felt like a kind of betrayal, to be honest. You just don't TALK about that kind of thing/offer to people you don't explicitly trust, if at all.
This is really good but I dont like how the coming chapters are being projected. It's not looking good for him and Diane at all unless her and pinkie can somehow be split up. Its pinkie during the day and diane at night and they obviously know each other and hold bad feelings for each other.
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I can't help but agree with you, in retrospect, I could have handled that better. I do feel like I was doing a good job of staying consistent with his character before that and after that, but that scene was a mess up on my part. I promise you I am trying to write this story the best I can, and hopefully won't do something like that again, I only aim to improve.
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Soon....
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It might not be as simple as you think.
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I try.
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I've seen/written a lot, and I mean a lot, of Pinkie and Pinkamena stuff. Not saying I don't love it to death, because I absolutely do. But I wanted to try something a bit different and a bit less...grimdark? Sad? Something like that. That split personality concept has always been interesting to me, and I always thought that the premise of a guy falling for the two separate personalities of one girl could work as a very interesting romance stories.
I'm not the best at writing romance or clops, or writing in general tbh, but I'm giving it my best shot.
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JAAASON!
Going to guess they're the same person but Pinkie doesn't know it. Diane may know it, given the distaste of Pinkie.
I look forward to finding out.
10234677 Do you? DO YOU?!?!?
Das good. I is glad.
10239044 IT IRRADIATES LEWD WAVES
I am fucking loving this!
I thought Diane didn't have a phone?
Anyway, I'm enjoying it. The hook that Pinkie has disassociative identity disorder is obvious but hey, it's still a fun ride.
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In my opinion? Most likely. It'd explain the similarities between them and why Pinkie never can find her. Also how she can go to the same school as Pinkie and nobody having seen her before.
Black
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Its too bad my name is spelt Jayson 😣 it sucks have a weirdly spelt name, between never seeing my name in a fanfic or growing up never finding my name on the keyrings at truckstops
Hate to be that guy but you may want to change his age. Sex scenes between human minors is against site rules.
https://www.fimfiction.net/rules Under do not post: Sexual content involving human/anthro characters under the age of 18.
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I did not realize it was. Yeah I can quickly fix that, thank you.
Fucking awesome!
This was precious. Amazing work
I'm so fucking invested in this story!!!