Moar sexy sexy! Next chap may not have any clop, so I can actually develop a bit of a story to this instead of it just being 'AJ and Spike have sex in varying locations.'
I never understood the "Twilight raises Spike" idea, it seems too unnatural for Twilight to have raised Spike when she was just a filly when he hatched. She would have treated him as an exotic pet, and that's ignoring the social stigma against dragons in general (which was evidenced in Dragonshy). Then there's the canonical evidence of Spike telling Twilight that she wasn't his mother in Winter Wrap Up. The only one who could be realistically considered as his surrogate mother or caretaker (i.e. the one who raised him) would be Celestia or a palace servant.
Ignoring that, this story feels like it'll end on a sad note.
I brushed over the nub beginning to show itself at the top of her sex.
I dont know if I got this right, but from my imagination while reading this, I figured that Spike's hand is positioned so that the thumb is pointing up. But a horse's clitoris is at the bottom of the vaginal slit, as in, if the horse is standing upright, then its closer to the stomach then the anus. Just pointing out a fact.
1706863 Sex/clop fics. I've kind of always wondered what a relationship would be between Spike and AJ ever since the Diamond Dog episode where he had that fantasy of rescuing Rarity and almost kissed AJ. I do like how you switched to Spike's perspective on that last chapter.
Yes, Spike would have an extensive vocabulary from living with Twilight for so long. Good, and subtle, characterization.
I had read that teasing your partner was a great way to heighten arousal, and make the final act that much more satisfying. Books have never lied to me before, so I went with it.
See, Apple Bloom and I had gotten pretty close over the years. Watching her go away to college sucked. I know I'm a dragon, and as such don't really get a standard education (nothing Twilight couldn't fix, let me tell you), but I still wish I could have gone with her. She told me not to worry about her, that she, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo would be fine in the big city. It still didn't help calm my nerves.
It's the stuff like this that made me choose this story over the multitude of others. I think I'm tracking like 3-4 clop fics, including this one. The fact that it's more than mindless sex is what pushis it over the edge.
1719906i meant was you aren't called of feeling it or your in a deadspot were it has trouble getting past the things in its path... the sun can feel my awsomeness! Plus OMFG YOUR ONLINE?!?!?!?! RUN NIGGAS AND BITCHES RUN!!!!!!
Ah, the horror of the what-ifs. Seems not only humans tend to worry about any possible outcome of not only future things but past things too. It boils down to our problem with a linear timeline and the wish for freedom telling us to act as we like. That's just my guess, at least.
All our lives, young males are taught that sex is the holy grail of intimacy, the one act that bring two beings closer than ever, all while giving each other the greatest feeling any natural function can produce. Gah, I need to stop studying with Twilight.
Ah yes, another deep philosophical theme behind that one. Males grasp of romanticism ties deeply into sex whereas females grasp of it is 'just feelings'. It is hard to say who is closer to the real concept - males with their often spoken of 'one-track-mind' or females with a fairytale of emotions without any kind of physical activity other than hugging and kissing. How is it called in 'Beauty and the Beast'? It's a tale as old as time.
Books have never lied to me before, so I went with it.
Looks like Twilight-induced education, that one.
The chapter is as hot as ever. Also...what will Mac say if he notices the two of them? I think a brother figures out something like that quite fast. (protective instinct and all that) Applebloom will cause (and have) a lot of problems too if she notices them when appearing for a 'surprise visit'. Twilight, although she may rut Big Mac will also want to speak with both of them in that department if they find out. And there are still the rest of the mane 6 and the general public who will want to talk about that. As you've said, 1716324, this kind of relationship is not exactly allowed in the parts around here.
Yeah, that's about it, I think. Oh yes, please update fast if your inspiration allows it, I guess.
Please...please...please...please...please...please...get the next chapter done soon as you possibly can! I want to know if this will become a relationship or not!
Moar sexy sexy! Next chap may not have any clop, so I can actually develop a bit of a story to this instead of it just being 'AJ and Spike have sex in varying locations.'
It 2:18 and I was about to bed until I saw this.
1706224 you'll sleep better afterwards anyway.
1706244 A.M.
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Apparently he has a thing for pegasus as well.
Hmmm go to sleep or read about spike and applejack having epic sexy times…meh sleep is for the weak anyway LET'S READ
Can't wait to see where you go with the actual story line.
1174932 JUST TRY IT AND FACE THE MIGHT OF EXTINCTION!!!
Nice gif by the way.
My thoughts when I read the description:
After reading it though: I see much potential in this one.
Keep up the good work. *thumbs up*
Poor applebloom.
Yay new chapter. . 1706244 When is the next chapter coming out? Btw I like where this story is going.
I tend to stay away from these types of stories but good god damn there were a couple lines I couldn't help but like.
Only took you 3 months. Good chapter
1706570 such as?
P.S. glad you decided to read it!
1706782 My apologies, I had to wait for inspiration to strike.
I never understood the "Twilight raises Spike" idea, it seems too unnatural for Twilight to have raised Spike when she was just a filly when he hatched. She would have treated him as an exotic pet, and that's ignoring the social stigma against dragons in general (which was evidenced in Dragonshy). Then there's the canonical evidence of Spike telling Twilight that she wasn't his mother in Winter Wrap Up.
The only one who could be realistically considered as his surrogate mother or caretaker (i.e. the one who raised him) would be Celestia or a palace servant.
Ignoring that, this story feels like it'll end on a sad note.
I dont know if I got this right, but from my imagination while reading this, I figured that Spike's hand is positioned so that the thumb is pointing up. But a horse's clitoris is at the bottom of the vaginal slit, as in, if the horse is standing upright, then its closer to the stomach then the anus. Just pointing out a fact.
was curious if this fic is planned to just be a series of clop scenes or if it will start picking up in the plot department (no pun intended)
I wuv it. Moar please.
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Sex/clop fics. I've kind of always wondered what a relationship would be between Spike and AJ ever since the Diamond Dog episode where he had that fantasy of rescuing Rarity and almost kissed AJ. I do like how you switched to Spike's perspective on that last chapter.
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well the SAD tag is there for a reason i think.
well when applebloom is back this story goes down (feeling wise) dunno if i read it then ...
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yay more plot as good if not better then clop (I bet you all $5 that I am the only one with that opinion).
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You have no idea how happy that makes me.
Yes, Spike would have an extensive vocabulary from living with Twilight for so long. Good, and subtle, characterization.
It's the stuff like this that made me choose this story over the multitude of others. I think I'm tracking like 3-4 clop fics, including this one. The fact that it's more than mindless sex is what pushis it over the edge.
HUZZAH! THE CLOP HAS BEEN DOUBLED!
okay... quadrupled... whatever.
1711181 Thanks! I try to add a bit of depth to my clop when I can.
1708295 that is the opposite of what people usually say
1717144 That's because I'm amazing.
1717370im amazing you just are to far away to feel it
1719819 Well obviously your not awesome enough. My awesomeness, like Rainbow Dash's, can be felt world wide.
1719906i meant was you aren't called of feeling it or your in a deadspot were it has trouble getting past the things in its path... the sun can feel my awsomeness! Plus OMFG YOUR ONLINE?!?!?!?! RUN NIGGAS AND BITCHES RUN!!!!!!
1719971 Yeah yeah say whatever you need to to make yourself feel better, also I'm online a lot of the time.
1729404 ya well... just shutup WHY ME NO HAVE GOOD COMEBACK?
1729724 Um 'legitimate reason'.
Yes, I am excited for the story development. Let the conflict come!
I have enjoyed it so far.
Ah, the horror of the what-ifs. Seems not only humans tend to worry about any possible outcome of not only future things but past things too. It boils down to our problem with a linear timeline and the wish for freedom telling us to act as we like. That's just my guess, at least.
Ah yes, another deep philosophical theme behind that one. Males grasp of romanticism ties deeply into sex whereas females grasp of it is 'just feelings'. It is hard to say who is closer to the real concept - males with their often spoken of 'one-track-mind' or females with a fairytale of emotions without any kind of physical activity other than hugging and kissing. How is it called in 'Beauty and the Beast'? It's a tale as old as time.
Looks like Twilight-induced education, that one.
The chapter is as hot as ever. Also...what will Mac say if he notices the two of them? I think a brother figures out something like that quite fast. (protective instinct and all that)
Applebloom will cause (and have) a lot of problems too if she notices them when appearing for a 'surprise visit'.
Twilight, although she may rut Big Mac will also want to speak with both of them in that department if they find out.
And there are still the rest of the mane 6 and the general public who will want to talk about that. As you've said, 1716324, this kind of relationship is not exactly allowed in the parts around here.
Yeah, that's about it, I think. Oh yes, please update fast if your inspiration allows it, I guess.
Please...please...please...please...please...please...get the next chapter done soon as you possibly can!
I want to know if this will become a relationship or not!
69 all the way
Giggity