Moar hornyjack.

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hornyjack

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LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL Spike makes me hate every romance fic that he's in! Now if it's Big Mac, well that's a whole 'nother thing. Damn immortal dragons and their fire breath and enormous size and strength and ability to fly and scales as hard as the strongest gem!
Too overpowered, need to go back in time and
re-write Draconic mythology, ALLONS-Y!

1174448 not to mention he can't hold his load. AJ barely touched him before he esploded.

This better be in the sad tag ONLY because of the trials and tribulations AJ and Spike will have to go through. Not because of a sad ending...

Anyway it's your choice, and darnit man you got to give me boners while I am in college.

Best wishes!

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Down, boner.
Bad boner.

Damn, the shit gonna hit the fan if Twi finds out that Applejack propositioned her little brother.

1174523 As a straight man, I'm not sure how I feel about knowing I gave other men boners...

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I knew it was Veggie.
But he's gone now...
*whimpers*

Damn, and here I thought dragons were reptiles and couldn't mate with mammals. Oh well, every author is the god of his/her story, carry on.

1174594 oh they won't be making mutant babies I can tell you that much.

Well that was amazing and I can't wait to read more

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OOps I meant to say you gave me a boner... Anyway, that is awkward ... HAPPY ENDING I DEMAND IT, for the story... So yeah. Bye.

*Leaves before he mucks up even more*

ahaha can't wait for the next chapter ... wonder if RD finds out first or Mac ...

1174462 Well, AJ does look pretty good.

I saw this in the featured box and was all
I read the first chapter and I was all
I read the second chapter and I was all
And now that I have come down from my soap-box of emoticons, I want to say good job! I like the first person perspective for the story, very interesting the way you're telling this. I would like to see a couple of chapters dedicated to Spike's POV, to see what his take on the fledgeling relationship is. Other than that, I would also like to see a happy ending for them, but I'm looking forward to it either way

50 Shades of Apples

1174448 nice doctor who reference, but that means you must be EXTERMINATED!

1174608 Why, in shrek it happened so why cant it happen here????
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1174828 Lol weak ass Daleks can't stop me foo! I'M THE CHAIRMAN OF THE COALITION OF ORDERED GOVERNMENTS, and I order you to die!

And then the chapter that twilight finds out! hi hi panic all the way

1174877 I DO NOT TAKE ORDERS FROM YOU!!! AS AN ENEMY OF THE DALEKS YOU MUST BE EXTERMINATED!!!
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I didn't realize there was a sad tag. I hope these two end up happily together and that we see more sexual encounters.

1174608 In most fantasy dragons can pretty much reproduce with anything...

Spitters are quitters, right? XD

MOOOAAAARRR!!

OH another chapter! you gonna make this more that just a one shot fic! YAY!

I think AJ's just jelly cuz California knows how to party.

...this'll end well.

i must say i really like your work. usually i have a short attention span so i would zone out here and there when i'm reading a story, but your stories so far have this flow that always makes me want me. iam so looking forward to the next chapter.

Still absolutely loving this. AJ perspective is nice and it's well-written with a hearty dose of humor that sure pleases me.

Keep up the great work!

Very good. It reminds me of my life. Life thats a funny word. Life. Liiife. Life. Ah well no matter. Allons-y

can we get a spike POV on this chapter i want to know what he was thinking during this expirience

1174579 proud. as long as it wasn't you personally who gave it to them. remember, it was your words and not your body

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Thestrels! Sort of...

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Also, tales like this normally ain't my cup of Monster, but I am liking this so far. You have my attention, my friend.

Oh hell when since this is Celestia fearing territory when Celestia funds out well you get the picture -->chzfandom.files.wordpress.com/2011/12/fanart-cosplay-celestia-as-the-god-empress.jpg

wow I really liked this chapter
the way AJ is getting close to the subject she want to talk heheh
and the westrle thing was a good think, well is obviously that dragons are More strong that ponys XD
but that think of AJ using her tail to tickles and trow him down was nice!
and then....how AJ talk him, softly but also teasing him so he get more horny X3
and then........disapoint XD LOL Spike just came whit some bobs XDD poor dragon, sounds like he still a baby in the inside XD LOL
Great story Brony Maximus! cant wait to see more!

Ahem....

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Interesting first attempt at foray into mature-based stories, Bronius. And the style you choose, having Applejack narrate without any actual usage of dialgoue (ie: quotation marks), but just general saying is quite bold, but I think it works. For this type of story, anyways.

Both chapters so far have been interesting. I was wondering if Applejack is either in love, compared to the other pony she mentioned being with (I think), or it's just lust. Probably the latter after reading this finally, and know as this is an account for mature works, won't probably see any attempt at dating or much story to this/future ones. Not that I mind sex fics that have little to no story, from time to time.

And I have to wonder where the sadness will come into play. Right now, I can assume Spike will either feel bad after probably giving his first time to Applejack when not in love, or she'll feel bad for doing it, as well as if he starts to fall for her and she reveals that doesn't feel that way about him. But not expecting you to tell me, so will wait to find out. It'll probably hit hard, when it does happen, though.

Well, I'm curious as to where this is going and seeing more Spike and Applejack together!

1174579 Agreed....and this is so bucking funny as hell, I love it, I'm going over to the next chapter now.

1181844 Very, very, very bad ass pic, for some reason I thought he was the Grim reaper of ponies...or creatues in genral in Equestria...would you mind if I use it for such?

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Name him Mortis, and yes I have no objections. Mortis is Death's horse, BTW.

"Boner, go away. Now's not the time"
"Neva!!!"

Blue walls.
Goddammit.

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MUST HAVE MOAR

Gee AJ is a beast when shes horny...

Calfiornia

Oh god, the puns!

Also, inferiority complex?

I mean, I ain't bad lookin' by a long shot, but I'm no Fluttershy...

I told him I'd make a deal with him.

The deal with the devil, hm?
Also, maybe Rainbow watches the two of them from a cloud?

Lastly, nice chapter. A few grammatical errors but they don't interrupt the flow of the story to much to bother me really.

Were Rainbow and Gilda...

2251568 Eating Sandvich? Da

2317666 da- I mean ja