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toshibafox #1 · May 2nd, 2020 · 3 · 2 ·

well at least he learned his lesson, so gotta up vote this.

LadyofSorrows #2 · May 2nd, 2020 · 3 · 1 ·

Oh no, the lesson has yet to begin, the mistress of lists will probably find some list of retired palace guards, or perhaps Celestia and Luna will personally provide positive reinforcement to ensure the lesson sticks. I think the end result is a ruined guard only good enough to work at the royal bordello.

Master king #3 · May 3rd, 2020 · 4 · 2 ·

I hope there's a sequel where they get together and he becomes her Coltfriend,Marefriend/pet

Chaos Blitz #4 · May 3rd, 2020 · 2 · ·

A few grammar mistakes here and there, but not bad.

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rikusorasephiroth #5 · May 3rd, 2020 · 7 · ·

Needs an epilogue.

zachary12 #6 · May 7th, 2020 · 2 · ·

nice work

Master king #7 · Jun 16th, 2020 · 1 · ·

I hope Flash gets/got pregnant with Twilights baby.

Blazenrun #8 · Sep 20th, 2020 · · ·

I would love to for there to be a follow up

abrony-mouse #9 · Oct 11th, 2020 · · ·

Heh, like it. Flash is a great character to tf :p

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