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Nice 👍
What a bunch of over-the-top fetishized smut.
I like it.
I would read it if it was not futa
you plan on making a sequel
Now that's the ship i want to go down with.
Great stuff, I'd love to read more of it
Your characterizations and descriptions are always so good.
It'd be fun to see Fizzy going on adventures and meeting new and exotic species. And then fucking them.
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Thank you! I'm a little startled myself at just how much of a perv Fizzy turned out to be.
Sees writer's profile pic, Check
Sees writer's name, Check
Sees Crysalis and Tempist Shadow character tags, Double Check! Dis gonna be good!
Starts reading....futa? I gotta start checking tags better. continues to read...
A displacer beast What the fuck does your internet history look like?
“My clawtoris,” ooh that's clever, and kinda hot.
Damn that is hot...maybe I should read more futa?
Great story thumbs up!
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Oh man, this is how it begins! Once upon a time I too thought futa was the ruination of many a promising lesbian ero-manga, until I stumbled across one that turned out to be too hot to ignore. Now look at me, a wreck of a person addicted to mare-dongs!
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Niiiiiiice avatar! Could I have a source please? I simply must have it to add to my collection.
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568969 on Derpibooru. Artist is stoic5.
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You rock! Thanks.
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------ Review ------
Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-I like the shortening of her name to Fizzy -- that's already a great start.
-Nice to see these two confident ladies playing off one another.
-The mentions of Fizzy's previous escapades were fun. It adds in a lot of crazy variety.
-Maybe it could benefit from being split into two shorter chapters?
-Changeling pussy is crazy. It's a great level of detail you've put into things like this.
-Cool to see Fizzy having a fetish for non-pony creatures, and it brings up lots of ideas about her further adventures with other species in Equestria.
------ Scores ------
To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 98/100
Allure: 89/100
Enticement: 93/100
Immersion: 95/100
Prose Quality: 95/100
Total Score: 470/500
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Third Base
Third place overall. But at least you got some kind of action!
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With 164 stories in the running, I'm not going to complain about that action, lol!
Freaky interspecies sex? Not again... *reads*
10278836
Not... again...?
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https://www.fimfiction.net/story/402750/spike-the-wild-weredog
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/22343/queen-chrysalis-lovefest
you have been warned
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How'd it go?
This fic is so great of a turn on
10439658
Hehe, thank you.