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TittySparkles


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Comments ( 8 )

nice work on the story:twilightsmile:

Shower sex is a kink now?

I learn new things every day on this site...

Very enjoyable story with a delightfully unusual pairing.

But whoever did the proofreading on this must have been distracted, tons of little errors throughout.

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Hit me with the errors. My editors were also asked to edit this on short notice, in order to meet a deadline I sadly couldn't make.

Starlight blushed at the complaint and couldn’t help but smile.

Think you want "compliment"

she became very laid back

had become

Ranging from size alternation of wanting to be a little mare underneath a brute of a stallion

this I'm pretty sure should be "alteration", the subsequent part is a bit strange, I mean, it's clear what it does mean but it doesn't work syntactically.

and turning her back to Celestia,

and,

notice that once celestial mane

that the

loudly as any subtly she had

subtlety

but now she had it in her,

now that

desire as last bit

as the

common sense and logic was overloaded

were

Great story! Really enjoyed the characters as well

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I appreciate it. I'll fix these errors right away.

"I like that look you're giving me," Celestia spoke in a low, dominating tone as she gently rocked her body, allowing the magical penis to rub up and down the tight opening. "Maybe I'll make you beg for it."

Uh oh, Princess Molestia alert :rainbowderp:, send backup! :pinkiecrazy:

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