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Omegathyst
Female Writer, Bisexual Writer, Smolder X Mare Crackship Connoisseur. Creator of the Smolderverse, and writer of many other kinds of clop and SFW stories (Commissions temporarily OPEN)
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Fuuuuuuuuck, I'm really high and now I want some fucking Taco Bell. Used to work there. Fucking love me a quesorito, but with extra rice instead of meat.
This is your official review from Dirty Little Secret's Dirty Little Contest!
Remember to vote in the contest's poll -- voting closes at midnight, June 6th.
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------ Review ------
Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-Using 'clop' as a sound effect confused me at first, but then it was fun.
-The references to a mysterious 'him' seem unnecessary and don't help this story at all.
-Very short and rushed.
-Might have been hotter if they didn't have the bubble of silence and might have been caught at any moment.
-Nicely slutty and casual pinkie pie.
------ Scores ------
To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 65/100
Allure: 35/100
Enticement: 70/100
Immersion: 65/100
Prose Quality: 90/100
Total Score: 325/500
The more specialized scores for individual prizes, as well as the results of the community poll, will be published when the full results are announced. If this story wins any awards, there will be another post in the story comments sometime after June 9th announcing that this story has won.
Thank you for participating, and thank you for contributing to Fimfic's collection of clop!