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LunarKnightmare
"The eyes in the walls watch intently. Lashes long and irises piercing, with no mind to know and no mouth to speak...." -some guy who sold me a Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles pop-sickle
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This is fun!! You asked for honesty, and I don't think you'll be surprised if I say your writing is pretty amateurish, but you've got a sweet passion I'm really into. And you're writing something that's far enough from formulaic that I can't tell what will happen already, and that's very nice. (I certainly have some hopes, though...)
The characters are all pretty distinct and cute, and I think that's one of the most important things to have down to keep a story engaging. Hope to see more, and that you keep having fun with it!
Oh yeah, I totally cheated in looking up the cover, so I'm not going to say. I guessed the source right, but I wasn't able to find the specific use without google, so I'll leave the props to a potential someone else.
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Hehe, thank you very much for your opinion, it was everything i was hoping for in the terms of feedback! It's no problem at all, like i stated writing is not my strong suit, so there will be terrible word structure including punctuation and the like. I'am really enjoying writing this though, I haven't felt this compelled to write out a story like this before! So it's definitely going to be a challenge for me, but i'm glad i was able to intrigue and entertain a few people.
I hope i can deliver with upcoming chapters and keep it fun and interesting to keep people engaged! So again thank you, and I will continue on with this little journey of mine!