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Uh-hmmm


I come from the land of the green and unknown, from tenth page drop, where the horse words flow.

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Lash has trespassed against the Divines and must make amends. Will she meet her doom in the underworld, or an eligible bachelor, ripe for the plucking? She really hopes it's the latter.

(RGRE)
{This story has two versions, the last chapter is the first person version.}

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Comments ( 9 )

Minotaurs are truly underutilized protagonists in this fandom.

Always a pleasure to see an Uh-hmmm update. I appreciate that you're always taking the time to do a first-person version, though I have to admit that I've gotten used to second person by now.

Speaking of which, there are some minor and mildly amusing editing oversights:

I can feel it in your nips [...]

I get to your hooves [...]

I open your mouth to ask [...]

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Glad you liked it, and thanks for the catches. One day, I shall use the find tool before I publish a story.

Kinda of out there with the set up but still had the humor I've come to expect from your stories. A hilarious curse too, her being turned lopsided. Haha

That's quite the courier for a booty call :rainbowwild:

I first read the description "Lash" as "Lars" and I was like "Wat?"

I really liked this for some reason. Has a lot of cool greek mythos in it, a really interesting Anon, and just the right amount of RGRE lust to make it interesting.

Of course, I think the big drawback with this is that it's so rife with possibility that it's hard to know what to begin and keep it all succinct. Like fantasy, you get more out of it the more you put into it, and that's not exactly the green way. I'm happy with what we got but it does leave me with a craving for a good book.

Being the God of the Underworld in any FiM universe would be extraordinarily fun, with RGRE just being the cherry on top. :twilightsmile:

Hmm, this would have been a pretty Cool concept for a full fic. Anon and maybe other humans replacing the Olympian Gods.
With Anon as Hades and flirting with Celestia by letters.

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