Twilight gives herself a penis with magic as an experiment, but finds she can't actually get rid of it. Suddenly, she's confronted with new obstacles in her self image, as well as new opportunities in her sex life.
10159646 lol I’ll accept the pun, but don’t get your hopes up too high with the sex in this story. I do think the story is something people will enjoy, but I’m extremely new to writing sex and it’ll probably be a while before I get any good at it. That said, I hope you do enjoy what’s to come!
‘No, shut up, you stupid fucking whore! Fluttershy is your friend, you can’t have thoughts like that about her! No matter how much I want it…’
She always did this. She always told herself she wasn’t going to masturbate anymore, that it only left her feeling miserable afterwards, that she was supposed to be better than giving in to such carnal pleasures. And yet, she always came back to it. Almost every single day, at some point, Twilight would cave in and touch herself.
10159713 Haha yeah, this isn’t going to be your typical porn story, there’s fallout to the characters’ actions here. Note however that I’m an extremely sex-positive person, and while there will be this self-hatred aspect, the point of the story is learning to accept oneself and one’s sexuality.
Anyway, glad you’re enjoying it, and I hope you’ll like where it goes!
also we may be *way* off the mark but it kinda feels like there's an additional layer on top of the sex related self hatred mayhaps one alicorn had genital dysphoria prior to the day's events? probably not, but we did get that vibe from early in the chapter even though it did seem to be stating the opposite later (although only from starlight's perspective, so who knows!)
10159734 I love the headcanon, but no, in this story Twilight was born a cis girl. But it’s written by a transwoman, so if it’s coming across with the vibe that Twilight’s used to genital dysphoria, that’s probably why – it’s written from someone used to it. Within this story, Twilight’s interests in genital modification is just to help Starlight and other transmares in her position.
yeah fair enough, was a wild guess also it wasn't even a "twi's not cis" guess so much as random speculation on if cis people could have genital dysphoria as well, thus solving twi's and starlight's problems at the same time in opposite directions 🤷♀️
and regardless, we're trans too and appreciate the representation!
The seriousness with which you're tackling the core focus here is unusually rare. At the same time, though, the more jovial overall tone lessens some the impact the more dire scenes would have otherwise produced. And the pacing as coming off as a tad rushed. Still, I'm curious to see where this goes.
10160860 Fair enough on the pacing. Reading it back I felt the same way, but since this is meant to be my for fun story, I didn't bother to fix it. Doesn't make it better for you, but it is something I'm keeping in mind for future chapters (I'll admit that the next chapter in particular suffered from pacing issues, but chapters I've yet to write will hopefully be better).
As for the tone and the blend between taking the subject seriously and keeping it jovial, I think I hit the balance I want. I'm sorry it didn't work for you, but for me, I'm rather happy with it.
10161332 I thought the pacing was a bit fast myself, but I'm glad it worked well for you. I'll definitely be updating, I have two more chapters written and ready for posting over the next few weeks, and hopefully in that time I'll write one more and have at least three weeks of updates (though no promises). Regardless, I don't start things and not finish them, so expect to see plenty more from me
I apologize in advance for the horrible pun, but I look forward to seeing what you cum up with in this story
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lol I’ll accept the pun, but don’t get your hopes up too high with the sex in this story. I do think the story is something people will enjoy, but I’m extremely new to writing sex and it’ll probably be a while before I get any good at it. That said, I hope you do enjoy what’s to come!
oh noooooo sex related self hatred
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Haha yeah, this isn’t going to be your typical porn story, there’s fallout to the characters’ actions here. Note however that I’m an extremely sex-positive person, and while there will be this self-hatred aspect, the point of the story is learning to accept oneself and one’s sexuality.
Anyway, glad you’re enjoying it, and I hope you’ll like where it goes!
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also we may be *way* off the mark but it kinda feels like there's an additional layer on top of the sex related self hatred mayhaps one alicorn had genital dysphoria prior to the day's events? probably not, but we did get that vibe from early in the chapter even though it did seem to be stating the opposite later (although only from starlight's perspective, so who knows!)
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oh yes, we didn't expect the self-shaming to last unchallenged, it was definitely an "oh no poor twi" comment
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I love the headcanon, but no, in this story Twilight was born a cis girl. But it’s written by a transwoman, so if it’s coming across with the vibe that Twilight’s used to genital dysphoria, that’s probably why – it’s written from someone used to it. Within this story, Twilight’s interests in genital modification is just to help Starlight and other transmares in her position.
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yeah fair enough, was a wild guess also it wasn't even a "twi's not cis" guess so much as random speculation on if cis people could have genital dysphoria as well, thus solving twi's and starlight's problems at the same time in opposite directions 🤷♀️
and regardless, we're trans too and appreciate the representation!
The seriousness with which you're tackling the core focus here is unusually rare. At the same time, though, the more jovial overall tone lessens some the impact the more dire scenes would have otherwise produced. And the pacing as coming off as a tad rushed. Still, I'm curious to see where this goes.
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Fair enough on the pacing. Reading it back I felt the same way, but since this is meant to be my for fun story, I didn't bother to fix it. Doesn't make it better for you, but it is something I'm keeping in mind for future chapters (I'll admit that the next chapter in particular suffered from pacing issues, but chapters I've yet to write will hopefully be better).
As for the tone and the blend between taking the subject seriously and keeping it jovial, I think I hit the balance I want. I'm sorry it didn't work for you, but for me, I'm rather happy with it.
In any event, I hope you'll enjoy what's to come!
Great story, pacing is great. I hope you update
Yes I did that for the rhyming,but seriously. This is some good shit and I hope you update, have my like and favourite.
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I thought the pacing was a bit fast myself, but I'm glad it worked well for you. I'll definitely be updating, I have two more chapters written and ready for posting over the next few weeks, and hopefully in that time I'll write one more and have at least three weeks of updates (though no promises). Regardless, I don't start things and not finish them, so expect to see plenty more from me
You got my patience