The following document contains a transcription of the events that occurred during the Everfree Incident involving the Wonderbolts and the Wasteland Explorers. Investigation into the events is ongoing. This document is classified under orders of Captain Shining Armor. Redistribution of this document is prohibited. Unauthorized access to this document is prohibited. Phantoms forever.
Special thanks to Juno Keter for beta reading and editing.
My second submission for the Barcast's Halloween in April contest.
Chapters (9)
Reminds me of Book 3 of Fire Emblem Heroes.
Definitely engaging and well-written. Have an upvote and a fave.
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Thank you! I can’t say I’m familiar with that work though. I experimented with hiding links and whatnot throughout the story, we’re you able to find any of them?
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You hid links? No, I didn’t. What should I be looking for?
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Yep! The links are pretty well hidden Well one's kind of obvious throughout the story. There are eight video/external links and six supplementary story links, I think like two are in the story itself and the rest link to each other
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Interesting. I’ll search for them.
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Awesome, best of luck!
Thank you for another story! Looking forward to it.
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Hope you like it!
Seeing Equestria use the same year pattern we do does make things a little confusing.
I really like the distorted pictures you've included. However, if you're putting 'clues' to be read in the squares, they're too difficult to read.
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Thanks! Yeah, that was kind of intentional... maybe if you click it and get a better look?
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I was just too lazy to come up with a dedicated year system just for the sake of one story lol
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Ah, so that's where the hidden links were.
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That's where the external links are, yep! You're the first person I know of to find them lol
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The deleted comments I made were "hints", but then the hidden music creeped me out and I
very franticallycalmly deleted the comments I made. One was, "SCP is interesting if you can find it." Another was, "Say your prayers."10184140
Oh I see! Congratulations on finding them!
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Thanks! I clicked all the photos and the space in between the two stanzas of the obstructed poem. Was that all?
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There are quite a few more! Fun fact, I never had this story beta read by anyone so it's interesting to see how well it's performing!
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Can I have a hint?
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You might see a familiar name if you check the description!
You know, the Grey Mare kind of looks like Octavia in a way...
It has just been confirmed by The Red Parade that I have found all the links! I can't believe I did it! I even solved some of their puzzles! I'm surprised that I was able to do it at all!
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I found 2 and 5 those weren’t hard but like short of just spam clicking the screen I honestly don’t know where to start on the other 4
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I think the next one to find links from number two, so if you found number two you're already pretty close!
No, I don't think I will come closer, th-thanks. :')
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holy moly I forgot I wrote this story until you commented on it XD
Oh shit, there's even more? :O I kind of figure I know what the password is, but I thought that would be it!
EDIT: Nope, I have no idea what the password is. :B
Well, that's one! I can't believe I didn't recognize the reference! :D
I'm going to assume there's just one per chapter.
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Each chapter has at least one if I remember correctly :U
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uhhhhh honestly I don't remember them all myself XD
but if you found the link then I think the text should have given you a hint for the password
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Unfortunately, I'm not good at these. :( I figure by this point it has to be the name of the daughter, since that's the name of the project, but I have no idea where I would have found that out.
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I don't believe the name of her daughter was the password, I think it was a part of the clickable text in the link
Can't find any of the story supplementals, but i love the pacing and unkowableness in this. It's an otherworldly unknowableness, where the danger is you dont know about it until its too late, not just mystery for myster's sake.
This was extraordinarily ominous. I always love stories that are presented in this sort of fashion. Short transcriptions that leave more questions than answers. Horror doesn't usually get to me, but dimensional, alt-universe type stuff gets under my skin, and it didn't help that I was reading in the dark in dead silence. I'm still a bit uneasy.
Wonderfully done!
Also, the mystery of these hidden links is gonna have me up all night! If I counted right, I found about 9. I cannot for the life of me find the others.
Fascinating and horrifying. I wasn’t able to find all of the hidden bits, but this was still a great take on the source material. Thank you for it.
So I found all the fancy hidden stuff was a fun adventure.
love me some SPC adaptations and this was better feeling then the actual SPC one
~Reggie
This is really excellent! Well-done horror a la John Carpenter. An interesting concept, and good character voices.
lots of extra effort too with the pictures and hidden hunt.