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Blueelectric


I am a pegisister, Steven Universe fan, Wings of fire fan, Warriors cats fan, and Avengers fan. And i'm also a She-ra fan. a MY Pride fan too.

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Falcon Heart; a golden and white pegasus, taken in by a family of falcons. As a filly she was given special powers from her father figure. She soon will discover the legend behind her abilities. She currently lives in a mountain range close to the Wonderbolts HQ.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 23 )

The story feels like its moving too fast and the dialogue could be smoother, but I love the plot and will definitely be tracking this

description reminds me of a fic of a little Thresral raised by giant bats in the everfree.

Well the only issue is with the grammar. I dont mind the story. But as soon as tha grammer isnt the best or good it is less enjoyable to read.

Really great story by the way

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Yes and even added them to my bookshelf called Spitfire Shipping stories. I even love the songs you put on them.

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Thank you so much. Sorry, I was eating. But that's so cool that you like them. :twilightsmile:

I love Jasper and Harmony! I watch Jasper's prank call videos and the TF2 games that he plays with some of the other fandom reviewers I like. It's cool they were in this chapter. Is Thespio making an appearance?

:rainbowlaugh:since when was Rainbow Dash good-looking

Sorry but there are a few mistakes:twilightoops: in the past tense but good work so far:pinkiehappy:

Another great chapter! I hope Falcon's okay...

D'aww, yes! Finally they're together! I'm worried about Falcon though...

Aww, they're so sweet together, poor Falcon being sick though...hm...last time I was sick I just laid in bed and watched Netflix, didn't interact much with my family (they were all busy)

cute ponies
last time my mum put me in her bed then i proceedid to vomit over all of the bed then she had to go to work so my sister kept me company and brought me water (cause you dont want to eat or drink anything when vomiting alot but should drink water to make sure you dont get dehydratid) then she had togo to bed herself and i eventualy got up and crawled into the bathroom where i had many cat naps inbetween which i would vomit into the toilet untill i felt a bit better then back to cat nap. My dad came home a bit later then usual to find me in the bathroom on the floor sleeping then nuged me awake and gave me some water before sending me to bed which after i sleped for about 12 houres strait i was better.
was a weird day.

Awww, that was so sweet! That sickness sounds ominous though...

Aww! That ending was very sweet! Worried about Falcon though. Looking forward to the next chapter!

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