Time to write some fanfiction! Yay! If you have any thoughts comment! I find reading them fun!
Despite her life being in constant danger, Rainbow Dash will not, cannot live like it is. She has so much more to live for than now.
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I think you should hire an editor, because there are numerous clunky sentences. That being said, I love how you wrote Rainbow and Pinkie's dynamic. Rainbow is already associated with the military in the main timeline, so having her be battle-hardened is the logical conclusion.
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Eh, it's fanfiction, it is what it is.
Though in context this typo is especially funny.
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Oops. I fixed it.