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Botched Lobotomy


Imprisoned (without charges) by the Paw Patrol

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Discord has a secret. Luna decides the best way to find it out is to steal it from within his dreams.
A genre-swapping Mystery-Comedy-Bildungsroman-High Fantasy-Romance adventure.

Written for Shrink Laureate's Season 10 Bingo Writing Contest from the following prompts:
Discord, Pinkie Clones, Princess Luna, Klugetown, Tartarus

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 14 )

All of this chapter is delightful :)

:facehoof:
Most fascinating actually. Can't put my finger on what this story reminds me of, but... 'tis good.

Of course High Fantasy has to have a prologue and ominous chapter titles. Brilliant. :pinkiehappy:
Also, high-fantasy Pinkie actually works. I'm really loving this so far.

Okay... did NOT see that coming. You just mad Lunacord a thing for me... that really shouldn't exist. :b
Beautiful. This story is tragically underappreciated, the genre-shifts are really well done and you managed to fit all those prompts into a meaningful and engaging whole.
My favourite in the contest so far.

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Aww thanks! This chapter especially was a lot of fun to write, and honestly the chance to slot in a fantasy prologue was one of the major reasons for choosing it.

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:raritystarry::raritystarry: Well I appreciate the compliment, and thanks for the read! :twilightsmile:

Whee. This has definitely got the "mysterious" feeling down pat. A dream is an excellent setting for a mystery.

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A dream's an excellent excuse for all kinds of things :raritywink:

Boy this is very interesting But I was wondering is it the real pinkie pie or the clone a not really sure what's happening

Wow so luna and pinkie and her clone are trying to find a way out of here and what is discord up to

whoa that was heavy man

Wow this is pretty something

oh wow i did not see that coming so discord is in love with luna

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